• Member Since 30th Jan, 2012
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Grazy Polomare


My Little Puny: A Play on Words

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A man wakes up in a world he doesn't recognize.

A quick story made on impulse. Read on and comment below :).

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Comments ( 13 )

That was pretty nice. Very stream-of-consciousness. An interesting explanation for the Enderdragon, but it is sort of unclear at what point Equestria became Minecraftia. Where did the humans come from? Where did the man come from? The egg?

Wow, trippy. I like it. I really do. Its got a style to it that is really seen and even more rarely pulled off well. It also had very nice and believable explanations for a lot of the more strange aspects of minecraft. Also, It may be because I have just recently seen the movie but I can't help but think that this is similar to Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy in some ways. That's a good thing though. A very good thing.

Just wow, great read. Kudos. :moustache:

sad but not sad enough to make me cry

Pretty good story man :derpytongue2:

This made me cry manly tears of joy knowing Spike was the Enderdragon, and he finally had his soul rest, so he could see his friends again. He wasn't scared.... he was happy.... you sir have made a true work of fanfiction here, I am watching for better accomplishments.

Woah. That's some deep stuff man. Real cool. I like.
:fluttercry: Poor Spike.

man this is sad, i understand now. The cycle will always begin again,

A very lovely story. The reasoning for the Overworld's creation is a little sketchy and vague, but it was layered with emotion. It didn't strike too many chords - I wished the Fall could have been given more detail. Above average, memorable, and enjoyable, but still has room for improvement.

Daww. . . . . . . .:pinkiehappy:

Speechless... I will never think of Minecraft the same...

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