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Total Hound


"Things are best when doused with cheese." - Said Me, every day of my life

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Lyra and Midnight are just your average ponies. Well, at least that's what want you to think. They don't even know each other, yet. Well, not personally, they were assigned to each other during high-school as pen-pals, yet they've never met face to face, they haven't even heard each-others voice or even seen a picture of the other. Midnight is a local singer in Ponyville. And, Lyra just lost her house in Canterlot due to financial reasons.
From a request by his old pen-pal, Midnight decides to take the unicorn in 'till she can get back on her hooves. But what will happen when they find out they've got the same issues.
Honestly, I doubt Celestia even knows.

P.S. First, I'm using this picture until I can find a better one, it doesn't mean Lyra's some wacked out ninja in the story... mostly. Also, the first chapter would've been shorter had it not been for the thousand word minimum. The chapters will usually be short. And, while it is third person, I will make each chapter follow 1 person at a time, and then make a separate chapter if they're together. Ok?
constructive Criticism is welcome.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 42 )

Well, It looks like this story is going along a lot better than my first one. To think it was just a beginners mistake, I used an alicorn without realizing the hatred that non-canon alicorns get on the site. I changed it so it worked out better. But the people who gave a thumbs-down still left an imprint on the story. So the rating is currently: 4 thumbs up to 31 thumbs down. I promise you it's better than that though, they probably just saw the word alicorn, and immediately down voted, left a nasty comment (in my eyes at least), and ran off with their tails between their legs, telling everyone they met to stay away. And only the four people who liked the story stayed, so I'm basically writing one of my stories for about four people.
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I don't really need to comment but I will anyway. This story is great! I personally like the switching between Lyra and Midnight in the chapters. Makes it really easy to tell whose POV it is.:twilightsmile: I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Sorry it took so long by the way guys.:twilightblush:

2205137 Got any suggestions by the way?

Oh 2205370.
I meant besides the obvious.

Is this a humanized story?

2206979
If it isn't then why the human tag?

2207024
Yeah, it was pretty vague.
You know, if they are already ponies by the events of th story, and don't become human again there is no point of the human tag. The AU one would be better.

Okay 2207043 and 2207039. Listen up.
One: They haven't become human...yet.
Two: They will become human...eventually.
Three: Only one of them was born human. The other one was born canine (fox of some sorts, haven't thought of a name yet.)
Four: Obviously it's not canon.
Five: You guys really shouldn't worry about it.
Six: The description was MEANT to be vague.

Comment posted by Total Hound deleted Mar 3rd, 2013

Finally! An update. This fic was nearing the end of my list.

2813764
hehe sorry about that. I was stuck on a bad idea, and I only just figured out a new one.

Is it strange that I read, and understood Pinkie's entire ramble/tangent/rant?:unsuresweetie:

2823943 Oh. Okay, good to know.:pinkiesmile:

Hey Readers. I'm usually online for a few hours after I post a chapter. So, if you want to talk to me in real time. Here I am.

2824772 Hmmm...yes, I like this. Also author, if you would humor me, how exactly will Lyra and Dream/Midnight go about changing into humans? I mostly ask this because the description gave the impression that they already were.
On a completely unrelated note, will Moondancer be making an appearance?

2824932
I will explain that to you further in a PM. Spoilers and whatnot. I guess Moondancer could make an appearance....but it would be a long...long..way into the story...maybe a flashback....You'd have to help plan that though.

2825683
....*tries best to hold back laughter*.......:rainbowlaugh:BWAHAHAHAHA:rainbowlaugh:

2825683
In all seriousness though I have to leave in on Sunday and I'm planning on making a short story for my readers where the story is essentially:
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3852768
No actually, just have to take a break to study for exams.

3855309
Not so much five months, those times I was just stuck on ideas. But exams are this week so...

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