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New and amazing discoveries present themselves to the Azerothian Paladin Titus, after he believes he has fallen to his death. He wakes to find himself in a land even more mystical than the one he came from.
This is a mlp/WoW crossover. Hopefully even those that don't play WoW will enjoy this, and even if you don't, I appreciate you giving this a read and the constructive feedback.
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to be honest. Totally not interested. But with the ammount of words you have and skimming the contents of a few chapters I can tell you done good. Have a like for a job well done.
gosh darn it i read bacon of light
poor Eleii
i was hoping to find a funny mlp warcraft picture but i failed in my quest
Have a nice FALL!!!
bwhahahahahahahahaha
Hell yes my friend! I have been waiting for a good Wow Mlp crossover!
Heh, glad you're all liking it. This was the product of a week grounded, didn't think anybody would like it this much. Now I know I'll have to write a sequel to this. Thanks again guys
Funny. I'm currently writing a WoW / MLP Xover too. Only difference is that the main character is a blood elf and female (not a cocky, deceitful kind of blood elf. More like a noble Argent Crusader kind of blood elf
)
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Sounds like my kind of fic, bud. I'll have to keep an eye out for whenever you get it out.
Loved it man!
this fic is actually pretty good
by god that was one of the best fanfics i read about a game
i would definitly love a sequel about this
Wow Eleii really got screwed over lol, too bad she didn't die.
SHE SAID IT! SHE SAID IT!
“You're wrong. You're my human.”
This was good
, even if it was a tale of a paladin 
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I wrote that. I still can't believe I wrote that lol
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Thank you kindly. I'll have to go back and clean it up again, thanks for letting me know bud.
That was fun, decent ending to from a writing standpoint. Open for a sequel, but doesn't need one. I like that.
I read this whole story and I have to say, freaking loved it. Heck, you even had me tempted to restart my WoW account after reading it. I found it rather cute how Lyra and Titus interacted for the most part, especially when she tried to put on his armor.
Every time our character dies in wow, its teleported to magical land of unicorns. Then it have an epic adventure and is resurrected back in Azeroth at graveyard.
hmmmmm.......
always love an ending that makes you feel both satisfied and slightly depressed
would love to see a sequal to this
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It shall be done! I got one in the works right now. Should be out by next week or so!
675854 then ill be wating....and watching you...............while you sleep :P
A paladin that doesn't know Divine Shield protects from falling damage, is no paladin at all.
The Elwynn forest had never been this bad, he thought.
Try using ' ' to symbolize thinking, like this:
'The Elwynn forest had never been this bad,' he thought.
Using italics also helps make said line pop out from the paragraph, allowing an easier read.
Anyway, so far so good. Onto the next chapter!
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Well I suppose it's about time I got some critique on the actual writing of the story. Hopefully you'll enjoy the majority of it, though.
"Look, can you tell me where I am? I’m so lost. I don't even know where I am?"
...Doesn't quite feel right, feels redundant, actually. Maybe if...
"Look, can you tell me where I am? I'm lost."
I mean, he wouldn't ask "can you tell me where I am" if he knew where he was, would he?
Just a couple of easily-correctable mistakes, so far. All in all, it's been a pretty interesting story, if a bit slow.
"Its armor,"
Its = Something belonging to "it". "Its strange behavior frightened me."
It's = It is. "It's armor."
"Nice, I didn't know you're kind could use magic"
"Nice, I didn't know you're kind could use magic"
Your = Possession. "Is that your pen?" "Your race is strange."
You're = You are. "You're beautiful."
Also, don't forget to punctuate at the end there.
"Titus never really had too explain what his people were like or how they acted before."
"Titus never really had to explain what..."
Story suffers from a few basic grammar overlooks, nothing a pre-reader or a quick edit can't fix.
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Gotcha. Will hopefully take care of that in the near future.
All right, the glove scene was pretty funny. Imagining Lyra with a plate glove on her horn...
No glaring issues this time around, fortunately. Well, onto the next chapter!
I'm FINALLY back from my adventures on earth, and I'm SO reading this after I'm done my next chapter.
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Woot, more of your stuff to read too!
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Also, I see that you're an avid Trivium fan... as am I.
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You just became my best friend sir.
Loved this fic, it was very well written with a great story, and i just love Lyra/Human fics.
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Heh, thanks man. Her obsession with humans made her the obvious candidate as the deuteragonist and love interest for this kind of story. Most importantly, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
ah world of warcraft, as much as i got made fun of for playing it, none of my friends have ever beaten me in any videogame/boardgame (that doesn't require luck) since.
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The power of dedication conquers all, my friend.
so...what class is Eleii? not one with the slowfall ability :3
rogue?
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A fury warrior bud.
I prefer Pinkie's ending. It sounds much better and it surprises you so you remember it, and thats how Equestria was made.
Yeah, he saved you twice from things that he brought and you were foolish enough to bother.
Before the goblin line, the description matched the one who pushed him.
What happened to his armor?
And another is enlightened about the truth when it comes to religion and greater beings (god, deity, etc.) Specifically christianity.
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... said the author, 29 weeks and 4 days ago... :P
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Welp!
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To be honest (and this is a huge fault of mine
) I was skeptic about reading this fic. I had my thoughts along the line of "WoW and MLP? Yeah right...". Yes, yes, I know I'm an idiot. 
I am so glad I read this. I enjoyed it so much and can't wait 'till tomorrow comes so I can read the sequel
I remember starting on "Wishing Well" when you just had written one or two chapters. Since then I've only decided to read stories that is actually complete so can't wait for that to finish now that I've read this.
I will see you again when I've read the prequel ;-)
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I'm so glad you enjoyed it and gave it a chance! I love it when I get awesome comments like this. I hope I can finish up some more stories so you can keep enjoying my writing!
Wait, he didn't know the spell you achieve at level six? Lolololol did he leave his brain at the inn?
... Why am I imagining the paladin to look like this guy in black, white and gold armor with a long, brown slightly torn cloak hiding his Warhammer from view?