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When Gilda arrives at ponyville to pay a visit to Dash and the gang, the group is in shock when the griffon invites her new boyfriend. And the guy our tomboy griffon is going out with is quite a surprise for the main six especially with him being quite a familiar face.

Note: This story isn't on the list of upcoming stories, this is just something I did for fun while taking a short break from dictators of ponyville.

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"Yeah when that big brute showed up in our town a while back he nearly Fluttershy into him thanks to his horrible advice and it nearly ruined Me, hers, and Pinkies friendship" As she made her statement the memories of that dreaded day played in Fluttershys head.

"And not only that, he ruined me and my families cruise vacation" Twilight said remembering how the minotaur crashed her family cruise and turned it into a zeppelin themed vacation and making her lose the chance to see the northern stars. However as her friends continued to make their statements Gilda let out a quiet long sigh

Oh yeah I remember all the reputation that he had and it wasn't too pretty

"Flutterhsy, Twilight, everyone............................................................................I'm sorry"

You misspelled Fluttershy

This was actually not bad of a story and a very interesting shipping between Iron Will and Gilda but nevertheless it was a pretty good one although there was a couple of sentence are missing some . So I'll probably check on some of the sentence because some of them looks like it was like fast but anyway it was nice to see Gilda seeing the main six after season 5 she change her ways and even get along with the other ponies and apparently she found somebody who actually cares for her and the girls were pretty excited for her that she found somebody but what they not expected it was another creature that did not have a good reputation Iron Will and of course the girls would not too happy with him after what he did but Gilda explained that he was sorry and he felt bad for everything that he did to Twilight and her friends so they give him a chance to say his piece but then the main six forgave him for his past mistakes which it was nice to see that the Redemption can be a long way but it'll be worth it in the end this was a pretty good story keep up the good work

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Thank you I'm happy you enjoyed the story:twilightsmile:, and yeah your right there are a few errors that I should go back and fix:twilightblush: This is one of my fan shippings that i wished got more attention from the fanbase especially since I felt Gilda and Iron will would look cute together:heart:

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You knew the boyfriend was gonna be Iron Will?

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Yeah. I don't know why, but it kinda just popped into my head when she was describing him.

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