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NO LONGER POSTING: love you all goodbye, and remember to never stop stop shipping cute things <3

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Rainbow Dash is having a strange morning. She woke up with a hangover, hoof cuffed to Pinkie Pie in her bed, and that's just the beginning of her problems.

Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie are going to have an interesting time.

Cover art found here

Chapters (3)
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Comments ( 38 )

ooooooh I shall read this!:moustache:

HMS RainbowPie is a sail. Continue.

The chapter was bit short, but good nonetheless :pinkiehappy:
I only caught one spelling error:

Rainbow Dash smirked "Of course it'll work. When have any on my ideas not worked?"

I think "on" was supposed to be "of" :twilightsheepish:
Anyways, I'll be sure to keep an eye on this :derpytongue2:

3472320
Ah, thanks for catching that. I didn't have anyone proofread this.

I am enjoying the premise of this story so I will keep a look out for it.

The cool and confident Rainbow Dash looked like she was about to have a panic attack. With each passing second, she found she didn't want to know what happened last night. Not all all.

I think that should be "at" so it would Not at all.

3472502
Thank you for pointing that out, and I'm glad you're liking the story so far:twilightsmile:

SHL

This one is gonna be great. At least, I hope so :pinkiehappy:

Implicit RainbowPie bondage? count me in.

Good story. There's a bunch of minor grammar errors, but nothing a good read-through can't fix. I saw here 3472339 that you have no proofreader. I'm willing to do it, so if you want my help, don't hesitate to PM me. :twilightsmile:

Well, this'll be intersting. :pinkiesmile:

*Is looking through tags*
*See's Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash, the Mane Six and Gilda*
Wait a second...
GILDA?!
:twilightoops:

3479936
I was wondering if someone would notice that before she came into the story:rainbowlaugh:

"Pinkie Pie tried to slip it off her hoof but it didn't move. After a few seconds of trying to remove it, Pinke let go off if and shook her head."

I think you meant "Pinkie let go of it and shook her head":twilightsheepish:

Are you still using the Kindle?


Great chapter by the way :3

3512586
Yes, it lets me write at least 200 words every night, but I really need to edit it and then send it to a proofreader. And thanks for catching that:pinkiehappy:

3512604 no problem, always glad to help:derpytongue2:

And then they had sex.

well, ok besides havin a few Hangover-lik thoughts pass throu my mind; I'm likin this fic n' can't wait for moar to come :twilightsmile:

3598148
Yeah, sorry for not updating. The chapters actually been done for a week, but I'm waiting for my proofreader.

Anyways, glad you're liking it so far. And I promise it won't be like the hangover. But there might be a tiger in Sugarcube Corners bathroom:moustache:

3598340
sweeeet :rainbowwild: but, i actually enjoyed t hangover trilogy (even thou I havn't seen t 2 yet oddly enough :facehoof:) so if there is any chappies that r somewhat lik t movies then awesome :pinkiehappy:

That line by Spike just fit and now we get into the meat of this story.

Next chapter seems like it's gonna be awesome :pinkiehappy:

SHL

That night it would be awesome :rainbowkiss:

ok, it's apparent that so far t girls (who hav bein shown) need a less stronger drink at t next party :facehoof: n' hopefully those two can find out what happened in last nite's party :applejackunsure:. Otherwise, can't wait for moar :pinkiehappy::rainbowwild:

3708745
Well, I haven't been writing a lot lately:twilightsheepish:. But I am working on it, and I want to be able to send it to my proofreader by tomorrow:pinkiehappy:

Hmm...I wonder what happened??

Better Together:
This may come as a disappointment to some people, but Better Together is going on hiatus. I can't say I'm too happy with it, I've put in effort like I do with all my stories, but I rushed into this one without even a vague ending in mind. But I will come back to it, I may update it every now and again. Once I feel like writing with it more, I'll go back to it. Under no circumstances am I cancelling it, you just might not see it for a while

This is taken from my latest blog post. That hiatus will only be for a few months until my other projects are either completed or underway. But I will be updating every now and again, wouldn't wanna leave everyone hanging for too long:pinkiehappy:. But yeah, following chapters will be better.

ok, besides wonderin on what :pinkiesmile: saw that slightly changed up her mood n' also why :twilightsmile: still had her ex's (unless there were originally hers :applejackunsure:) hoovecuffs. Also i kinda feel bad for both :rainbowwild: n' :twilightblush: since one has to stay hoovecuff thx to a :pinkiehappy: promise; while t other better watch out due to :rainbowdetermined2:'s lil threat from earlier

SHL

4014258 Ok, don't worry :pinkiehappy:

They didn't do the motions so it does not really count right?

"Don't Drink Kids" Said Your Mom But Then You Read This And Drank Anyway Because Ponies Did So You Did Too :D

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