Uhhhh.... Says 'complete'.... added new chapter.... not 'complete'... brain confused...

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I did a bonus chapter on demand of you, the fans.

1948600 I just got done reading it, and I liked it. I hope I didn't upset you with my previous comment, I didn't intend for that to happen.

yay more plz
oh and

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Nice chapter, was pleasantly surprised when I saw it

1948694 oh yes i am but i still like more can you really say no to this face
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And now I wait for someone to get the reference I slid in there.

I like it, very good story. You showed how simple plot can be great with good way of narration :)

I liked it.

Welp. This new chapter surprised me! Good one though. :)

worker.........wasnt he that one pony that was a docter trying to catch a runing animal useing robots........before he retire?

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THAT's RIGHT! YOU WIN THE PRIZE!

Awesome story and awesome chapter. So this story is set in the same universe as "From Order to Chaos" (I think that that's what it's called, I know that it's on E.Q.D..) by Twilight Snarkle (If I remember that correctly.)? It crosses-over to an extent with the story of Doctor Ivo Robotnick's redemption? I'm glad to see that everything worked out well in the end. (I only read part of the sequel, it was good, but I had a lot of other fics to read.) Anyway, good job.

I just read the whole story. Its pretty good.

The only error I noticed is that it is spelled 'arachnid', not 'archnid
Not sure if you did that intentionally or simply did not realize, but either way, there you go.

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It was intentional.

this was a very interesting story that i toughly enjoyed i hope there will be more to this story be it an update or a sequel i hope to see more in the future

Interesting.....

As complete as this individual story is, this continuity feels incomplete. Somepony (or someling) get to sequel-ing this posthaste~!

Yup it's awesome very good!

Lovely, Lovely, Bravo, Encore, grwsrhiwrw
As much as i want much...MUCH more. I guess this will do. xD
i feel so ecstatic and happy after reading this.

FUCKING GLORIRUS

The main character is very Mary Sue, and you repeat the same phrases (carnal, silver tongue) a lot, but it was still a good read. Liked.

Good read and a little shamelessness.

epic

Beautiful, really.

not bad. not bad at all. i think ill leave this one in my favorites.

No comments, i just have none its that good of a story.

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Thank you, my dear. I do love getting positive comments on this story. One of my personal favorite works of mine.

2592512 Might i suggest a sequel? if you haven't allready ( haven't had the time to check) I see potential for something awesome on the horizon

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Recluse may have a more clean return in Hand in Hoof as a later ally for the protagonist.

i love this story

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good show

1948600 I enjoyed this story, exploring one member of humanity's compassionate and synergistic capabilities, as he, though a prisoner initially, strove to not only understand a different specie and their culture, but even to pave a way for a better life for the hive he lived in and even calm qualms of another species due to their lack of communication and having little if any knowledge of Changelings (fear of the unknown) and enabled the Changeling hive to enter into a symbiotic relationship with another specie.

I always love a good changeling story

a beautiful show of love in this story. your a great writer.

exlante

May i ask you to make a sequel i want to know how their family expands

PLEASE MAKE MOAR

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Sorry, dude; I've long-since finished this. Although I have bleached my underpants for a future return of him in a fic.

He accidentally transformed himself into a hermaphrodite? You trying to say he gonna be a mother as well?

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He isn't quite used to transforming under arousal.

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Still... It was an... Interesting mistake

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It was intentional on my part to write it that way.

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I meant on his part, I was aware that you meant it... This was an interesting story, thank you

I was a little unnerved with the bit of r63 in chapter 3.

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I got a wee bit carried away.

Ohh this was a great read. But you know what's missing?
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. . .
A SEQUEL!!!

This is officially midnights top story of the month * several party poppers and other cheery sounds can be heard, *

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Yaaaay!