In S9, After King Sombra's horn was found in the Crystal Empire, the princesses have decided to resurrect him and reform him. The pony to reform him will be none other than... Fluttershy! But what will happen when our yellow pegasus learns more about the evil king? When he gets his strength back, he is ready to attack the crystal empire, but will he?
Page generated in 0.099 seconds
Total duration
992 users online
180,694 hits today, 2,244,100 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Interesting. You got my attention
Nicely done
Short but good. Kinda reminds me of a friend who had a similar idea
nicely done!
11009142
Thanks for commenting!
11009310
Youre welcome
I'm really enjoying this story, you're doing a good job.
11009531
I'm happy you're enjoying it.
nicely done once again
11016047
TY!
11016058
you're welcome
I just loved this story, even though it has few chapters, I can say the story will be amazing to read, but here's a tip: try to increase the size of the chapter, it will draw more attention and the story will progress even more, I I know it can be difficult, I have problems with that, but it can help a lot! (Sorry if I misspelled any words, English is not my mother tongue)
11029307
Ok. TY for the advice.
11029613
better late than never
11032288
👍, You're right.
11032289
mhm
Glad to be of help!
Though, you got a few errors
11067770
You're welcome, and what errors?
11067825
why do the " twice here?
Parapgraph?
why a " at the end?
11067965
Oh. Thanks for pointing them out. I'll get to fixing them.
11067965
I've fixed them. :)
11067974
YOu're welcome
11068005
:D
Glad to be of help
11074891
:D
11074937
Youre welcome
Yes! Finally, another Flutterbra ship. I’ve been waiting for another one to be made for so long. Not many ship Sombra with anyone these days so it’s always great to see it. If you ever need any help with grammar or someone to look over it I can be of help as an editor.
11086775
Thanks. If I need any help, I'll be sure to contact you. Sombrashy stories are rare.
You're welcome, though i am a bit surprised you deleted the reference i did
11092522
I decided that adding that part might be too much, and it wouldn't fit in.
11092526
if you say so
nicely done!
11105253
Thanks.
11105256
You're welcome
Oh boy, did they- maybe my mind is too dirty but other then that I enjoyed it very well, Im looking forward to the next chapter!
nicely done and good idea about the CMC. Dinky and PIp maybe too?
Also, glad to have helped about time this got up. An INteresting fact about him passing out from foals.
And Berry punch, i used a similar idea once
11150559
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it! They might've done it
11150580
Thanks! And you're welcome.
11150616
you're welcome
heh, yeah. she really should've tried talking to the enemy first, huh fluttershy?
because i'm sure you did that.
11150986
Fluttershy: Of course I did!
oh fuck yes
Youre welcome and interesting solution for the end
11172062
The next chapter will show Sombra's memories of it
It was a last minute thought that saved the day!
11172066
eager to see that
This is in S9 tho when the entire changeling race save for chrysalis were reformed 🤨
11271675
Fluttershy worries about things that don't need to be worried about.
B-but Sombra! What if the changelings did attack? I mean, I know they're all good, but what if there were a few bad ones that suddenly attacked us all?
glad to have helped