A Little Magical Mishap

Rainbow Dash helps Rarity out. Twilight receives a new spellbook. Now, what could possibly go wrong?

...I'm not sure you want to know.

This is a request from JBlaser.

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Hyper Star

Hyper Star #1 · February 10th · · ·

The purple alicorn's eyes light up and she teleports to Spike although she could've just walked.

Just say "Twilight," not "the purple alicorn," everyone already knows she’s purple.

Upon opening the book, she sees a note. Dear Twilight Sparkle, my faithful student. I would like it if you were to practise these spells, as they may come in handy should a villain attack. ~Princess Celestia.

A rephrased version would be: Dearest Twilight, please learn even more powerful spells to defeat even more shit so I have even less to do

"Let's see what the next spell is… Ooh, a spell to send a pony or object to a world filled with copies of the last pony they saw? This should be interesting!"

...

Hang on, what’s happening?

Why is this feeling like my own fanfic?

Why... JBlaser...

That aside, why does a spell like this exist?

"Oh horse- apples!"

Nice save, Twi.

Rainbow gulps as she gazes upon the Princess. Rarity looks beautiful like this…

Tags... check the tags... no romance, huh.

She glances at Rarity who has passed out on a conveniently placed fainting sofa.

I’ve come prepared!

She thought that they were done with the physical stuff there, but one item was left, the name of which were golden cuff-style bracelets, which now adorned her hands.

Hands? Did you accidentally write "hooves" as "hands" or did the Raritys use magic to give Dash hands?

Before we address the story, let’s address something else:

This story is frighteningly like my own, which was also requested by JBlaser. Now, the only reasonable explanations I can think of are the following:

A) You mentioned that you took a full year to complete this, perhaps JBlaser thought you weren’t going to complete it, hence giving the story to me. You, however, managed to complete it before me.

B) JBlaser forgot they already gave someone this prompt and gave it to me as well.

Right, back to the story, a lot of it seems forced, for example, Celestia sends Twilight a book with a spell that sends you to a dimesion full of the last pony you saw, why would this spell exist? Also, why is Twilight testing this on a teacup?!

Don’t know, have a CRACK! rating

KingSombraTheTyrantRuler

KingSombraTheTyrantRuler #2 · February 10th · · ·

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It gets a little tiresome writing "Twilight did this, Twilight did that all the time", so I refer to her as other stuff like the purple alicorn or the Princess of Friendship, etc.

You did a much better job writing this story than I did, though JBlaser really should've told me they asked someone else to do it.

Right, back to the story, a lot of it seems forced, for example, Celestia sends Twilight a book with a spell that sends you to a dimesion full of the last pony you saw, why would this spell exist?

To be honest, I couldn't think of any other way it'd work out.

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