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KingSombraTheTyrantRuler


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This story is a sequel to Alternate ending of the beginning of the end, part-2.


All the King's enemies are defeated, or are they? King Sombra shows his love for his wife, and together they have a child. They are full of happiness, but somepony has to ruin that happiness. Especially when his plans are ruined. This is the sequel to Alternate Ending Of The Beginning Of The End, Part-2.

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I love Sombra. Do you take requests for stories?

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I sure do take requests. PM me any time about your request, and I'll accept it.

Cool. I love that Tirek and Chrysalis have no idea they're heading for a trap that they will never see it coming.

No offense, but I believe your stories could use a little more detail. You should try to extend your sentences. Read other clop fics and you’ll see my point.

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This was written a while ago when I wasn't that experienced of a writer, so I don't take any offense from your comment.

And yeah, this really could've used more detail. I'm not that great at writing sex, and when I wrote it, I had hardly read any clopfics.

The guests were some umbrums and ponies. The bracelet bearer for RainbowDash and Soarin was Spitfire, while Scootaloo and Spike's one was Rarity.

wavechill and spitfire should get married :)

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