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YetAnotherTweenEdgelord


🇳🇱 🇺🇦 Putting "shit" in "shitpost" since 1996 🇳🇱 🇺🇦 [your/mom]

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well, this is a rather interesting and good story. Can't remember those 2 have much straight clop where its just fun

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Maybe it's the lack of good male characters around their age, and people make Diamond a dominating bully more often than not. Also, it's a bit hard to avoid writing Diamond and Silver as a couple...

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i hear ya, stallions and colts need more attention in general

i admit, your story reminded me a bit of my own idea ad gave me a silly thought.

but loved the shower sex, its always nice

Funny and sexy--perfect!

God, I wish I was in this situation.

I really love the short side stories woven into the narrative, they make the main character feel connected to a bigger world.

Poor Moondancer, someone hose her down.

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Moondancer is actually pretty fuckable, assuming you shower her first (hmm, I wonder if non-consensual showering is a thing). The problems start when she gets too attached.

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hmm, I wonder if non-consensual showering is a thing

With a fire hose, it can be.

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Guess I'll have to add this one to the list.

This is a fucking masterpiece!
Thumbs up, favorite!

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Thanks, man.

Your avatar seems kinda fitting, btw.

Bysen #14 · Dec 3rd, 2021 · · 1 ·

This was too funny to jack off to.

”Ruining Mario franchise forever”

How could you?! :pinkiegasp:

Not a bad clop … despite all the edginess.

Seriously, why’s he got to be so obsessed with Moondancer?

Most of it was pretty meh, but when it got into the shower scene with Silver Spoon, things actually got good. Mostly because the fic stopped making edgy asides and actually started focusing on some good detailed descriptive clop.

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It's not obsession, it's bad roommate trauma. And yeah, the scene with Silver Spoon was the moment it all clicked and I decided to continue in this direction. Hell, I mentioned in some other fics that they're sorta kinda together-ish.

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