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"What" is all I can say with my first impression of this story.
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Sometimes my mind goes places. "What" is probably a good way to describe it.
When I saw this was a Sunset seeks revenge for Anon-a-Miss plot, I was tempted to drop it, but I skipped to the end out of morbid curiosity.
Yeah, no thank you. Though I do appreciate what you did with Derpy Feet.
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Wait, who's Derpy Feet?
What's the non-con tag for?
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Well, you can't call the human one Derpy Hooves, now can you?
Ok this was morbidly amusing.
The fuck did I just read
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Vignette. You can't really consent if half of your head is missing.
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That's the spirit.
Funny enough, this would be right up 4chan's alley. I would post the story there for some great feedback and reactions.
In here there's too much shock and awe, you need a relaxed audience to appreciate this.
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Funny thing is, at first I started to write this as a green for EqG-TV thread (since it's mostly Wallflower anyway), but quickly decided to make it a proper story.
250 years ago when Marquis de Sade (origin of the word sadism) published his collection of dark erotic friction detailing violence, sadism, snuff and crime, it was decryed as appalling and it horrified everyone that read it. It's remarkable to think that since then we as a society have become so desensitized and indifferent to violence, suffering and death that works of fiction like this and one's even worse ("Celestia's relaxing vacation", "Equestria's Finest", etc) are par-for-the-course and often don't inspire any stronger reaction than mordid curiosity or at worst, mild distaste. We read and write them for fun. It's pretty fucked up when you think about it.
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Well, the ratio on this one seems to show that some people are repulsed by it (assuming they read it). Also, I checked out of curiosity and apparently while de Sade wrote 120 Days of Sodom in 1785, he himself thought the manuscript was destroyed during the storming of the Basteille. It actually resurfaced only in 1904. Guess we became desensitized because since then we had two world wars and some other shit, so art, especially non-visual art like writing can't really catch up.
I always liked Bronystories more than Headless Rainbow, tbh.
This story was very interesting. Actually what drew me to it was the chapter titles. Because every chapter title is one letter from the word 'yeet'. I don't know if anyone else picked up on that. Chapter one is titled: Y. Chapter two was titled: E. Chapter three is titled: E. Chapter four is titled: T. What does that spell? Yeet!
I love it!
This is delightfully fucked up. This is what artists strive to make one day in their mortal lives.
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Thanks. Somehow, no one these days writes truly fucked up shit (and if they do, it's usually some half-illiterate teen). I'm thinking like, Bronystories, Shadowed Rainbow, or Kaidan (though he came back). It's as if writers now are afraid to offend or scare readers.
More that they've deluded themselves into thinking that green and red thumbs mean anything.
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True. Given what's usually in the featured box, it looks like quality often doesn't match the story's rating.
Should have made Novichock, the story is kinda boring.
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They'd have to learn Russian then.
There's a guy for everything.
This was a surprisingly moving story.
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There is, if you look hard enough.
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Funny how this works, huh?
30 seconds in and Twi is already dead? Shit...
I feel like these type of fics get a lot of flack for killing off characters we've all grown to love. But that's why I'm here for it, fuckin love this website man
I'll gradually post more comments as I get further into this story, looks good so far!
As in the isopropyl that people use in smartphone repair?!
*Looks over at my desk full of phone repair equipment, and isopropyl alcohol*
Nice.
(FBI this is a joke I only repair phones for fun)
Lmaoooo
I can honestly say, good riddance you little shit.
Anon, getting Sunset laid is the therapy!
Fuck yeah, scientific accuracy!!!
Veeeeeery nice. As a car guy, I approve.
(It says a lot that this is what I'm first quoting, and not the pure trauma before it, but here we are)
Je-sus christ.
You brought this on yourself, Rarity
I'm all for clinically insane Sunset in this, lol
Holy fuck.
I'm sorry WHAT?!
Sure, I guess.
I think you really need psychological help, man.
Aww, wholesome.
Proud of you, Twilight.
The time loop begins and ends here. Brilliant fucking writing, I must say.
God damn, is it bad to say i laughed at this entire bit?
YOU FUCKING LEGEND!!!!!
That. Was. Brilliant.
Maybe I'm just mega-fucked up for this, but that was the best fic I've read in a while. Cheers for that
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I guess people are biased because 90% of grimdark on this site is crap. Same goes for niche fetish fics.
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Once you read this fic, I guess you're on the list (I expected a visit from AIVD while doing research for this fic).
That was one of my goals.
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I've been listening to Horny in a Hearse by Nekromantix a lot while writing (from other musical inspirations, I imagine Wallflower's father looks like Sparky from Demented Are Go).
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On the bright side, she wasn't at school when they gassed it.
Also, my prereader was done with this fic right after the Vignette scene (and they write rather crazy shit themselves).
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Anon definitely will.
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Shortly before joining the site, I read a fic about Wallflower and clown robbers which used a similar flashback thing and I tried to use it.
Thanks
One of the weird most charming stories I've ever read. The subject mater, and oh so many crimes and violence, are in a mild, loose, casual manner. It actually greatly enhances the story's comedy. And the second POV is easy to integrate with.
Beautifully twisted story. I am simultaneously desensitized to parts and disgusted my others, making for quite the stew.
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Thanks. I was kinda going for that "everyone is insane" feel (well, they're varying degrees of insanity - Anon seems fine compared to Sunset, but then he kinda allows the events to happen, not to mention the fetishes he finds out to have). And of course the over the top violence, a bit of Clockwork Orange here, a bit of Palahniuk there (well, I'm not saying it's some intellectual commentary as I mostly wrote it because I wanted to see the people's reaction to it).
Watching Vsauce really paid off
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Gonna ask my local Chapati shop for some C-4
Edit: jhe cxalled tge poilkuce (+soery vcor aspelking mistackes un ryunbnincg asway rdighyt nbow)
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Did they catch you?
No way she just said "lol" outloud I would kill her immediately right then and there
Nonononono all the things anon just did were okay but this....this is a fucking chronic sin and he should go to hell immediately
F in the chat bois
Silly Vignette, everyone knows you don't look in the barrel
This Sunset Shimmer has the same energy as the Sunset Shimmer in NMHM and I love it
Sunset Shimmer in NMHM:
They're both unhinged and clinically insane,
they both worked with the two main characters atleast once, and both of them are dead. So many similarities!
Try Getting a Reservation at Horsia Now, You Bucking Stupid Bastard!
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I'm currently hiding in my uncle's underground bunker
Silly Wallflower, everyone knows that Tor browser + NordVPN + incognito mode + just using the little Google translate widget that pops up when you search "russian to English" instead of using the actual website + turning off the WiFi immediately after translation = the FBI won't know a thing!
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I'm not familiar with this acronym. Also, people who say "lol" are clearly insane.
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NMHM (No more hoof measures) I just said NMHM to make it easier and I wasn't expecting you to know the acronym
Very insane. Saying Lmao out loud is a little acceptable but if someone says "LOL" unironically they are nuts enough to kill 20 people with nut allergies
My honest reaction to this information:
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Rip
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