• Member Since 7th May, 2012
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ChaoticHarmony


Hey guys! I write sadfics and sadfic accessories! Oh, and I also do comedy things. Yeah. Feel free to check out my stuff! And I hope you enjoy whichever story of mine you happen to be on! ^^

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Everything must end eventually. Ponies will drift apart as they grow, each of them pulled down a separate path of life. For some, it's a paved road lined with bright lights and jeweled sunshine. For others, it is merely a simple trail with only the light of the stars, sun, and moon to guide them.

Inspired by this comic

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 99 )

Another great job. LOVE the ending. Just bit more and I would've wept like a filly. Bravo and keep up the great work CH!

i cant read it now but i will defiantly :)

Do I smell a feature coming?

1254820 I did do a bit of advertising for you, so who knows. :derpytongue2:

hmm, i wonder if this is a sad fic...
well, i'll read it later.

I'm the D to the o c t, o r W Hooves, and there ain't no other time lord pony down like me, I'm doctorlicious~

Aaaand fav'd. Now for some tissues.

uuuuuuggghhhhh.....:pinkiesick:
you're killing me man!:raritydespair:
my heart feels like its crumpled like a ball of paper
lemme just.........

k all better now!:pinkiehappy:

1255054 I take it... um... that you liked my story? :fluttershysad:

1255065 YEAH!:pinkiehappy: ....actually:moustache:
dont worry, no negative anythings were uttered in my comment

Just wanted to mention that at first I thought the cover pic was Jake from Adventure Time as I scrolled passed it on the Front Page. Marking story to read later.

D'AAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW:raritycry: Manly tears have been freely given to this story. Wonderful story, sad, but with happy undertones..

1255435 Mission Accomplished, feels aquired.

1255432 I hope you enjoy it when you do read it.

1255420 I'm a fast reader. Ha, but in all seriousness, this ain't bad. I like how the cover art kind of hints at what is going to happen.
One small piece of advice I have is to tell different ways in which the ponies left. I think in every little flashback you used the word "leave" in some way. Just try to vary it a little if you can.
Also, remember I'm always up to preread if you are ever wanting any additional advice or something like that. :twilightsmile:

1254820

I was brought here from feature box!
I don't generally read sad fics but I do every once and a while, having noted your humility and general sense that you put a lot of heart into this despite much doubt as to the results I shall give this a shot:scootangel:

1255512 I hope you enjoy it! :pinkiehappy:

1255513 I love that face she makes :rainbowkiss:

Sad.

It's so sad! *throws things*

The story is well written, so I'll pick on you. You've got "butter-yellow hooves" in there three times. It is a description that sticks in my mind, so for a short story like this, I recommend using it just once.

That's all I've got. The only other thing is that my mind refuses to believe they'd all part like that and never see each other again. There's kind of a funky relationship between distance and visits, too, because when your friend lives far away it means you have a free place to stay for vacations!

1255677 For your second comment about the leaving: It's supposed to be symbolic of people leaving each other and moving on to bigger and better things, eventually forgetting their friends except for what they use to remember them. (I hope that makes sense) :twilightsmile:

Tis so sad, but tis so good. I don't know what to feel right now. Awesome job as always.
May your pen flow with ideas and your stories be filled with awesomeness.
~Black Light

1255735
How could i not. it made me feel sad, but it was that happy sad you feel when everything about a bad moment just goes right.:pinkiesad2:

dahek?My comment disappeared.

The world is ending.

Well I'll just say what i said before then.

I guessed the main characters based of of the coverart posted in his blog post a few days before the fic came out (ftw me) and

ALSO

CH this is the first sadfic that I ever really liked. I hate you for making me sad.

1255843 I deleted the first chapter to reset the view counter. :twilightsmile:

1255888
Why. Did. You. Give. Me. These. Feels?

1256066 Mission accomplished. Feels acquired by target.

A wonderful story! This is definitely one of my favorite depictions of Fluttershy.

Write on! :twilightsmile:

1257003 I'm glad you liked it! Hope EqD does as well :unsuresweetie:

...Your other Sadfics made me tear up and earned you another watcher, but this... this has me unabashedly bawling in front of my computer. well done. well fucking done this was the best sadfic I have ever come across. you have earned my thumbs up and fave

1257446 Mission accomplished, feels aquired. Glad that you liked/sobbed/"whatever feeling it was" the story! :pinkiehappy:

I just can not find the right words to describe how I feel right now.
This is a very touching story.:fluttercry:
~looks around~ Now where did I leave those tissues.

This was such a touching story! Loved every word of it. :raritydespair::heart:

Beautiful tale, told in a beautiful way. Even if the idea itself isn't something new, it's totally worth the read.
Great job, fine author!

Wonderful story! At first I was worried it would be the everypony-dies kind of sad, but it turned out excellent! :yay:

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