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ChaoticHarmony


Hey guys! I write sadfics and sadfic accessories! Oh, and I also do comedy things. Yeah. Feel free to check out my stuff! And I hope you enjoy whichever story of mine you happen to be on! ^^

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The gritty wind blew around the seven as they stood proudly atop the hill, whistling as it passed them by and carrying the overwhelming sound of hissing on its gusts. Below them stood a writhing, black mass with what looked like insect wings jutting from the individual shapes that formed it.

"Hey... girls?" Twilight couldn't keep the quiver out of her voice as she stared into the pure-blue eyes of their foe.

"Yeah, Twi?" Applejack's voice was as steady as ever, if heavy with a sad resignation.

"See you on the other side."

Inspired by the image from AssasinMonkey!

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Comments ( 39 )

Well I think I already know what happens from the description alone and it makes me sad :unsuresweetie:

Seeya' on the other side.

Awesome story so far, definitely tracking. Keep up the good work. :twilightsmile:

1563508 ACK! It's supposed to say complete! :facehoof:

God damn you!! I fell into the readers paradox!! I knew I want going to like the ending of the story!! I knew they would die! But I still read, I still wept, and I enjoyed reading it!! Argh!! It so good but the ending is just so sad, and epic!! Faved and upvoted.

You send um to their deaths, which I understood and foresaw, but the shot at Spike's interest in Rarity was just cruel and unnecessary. :ajbemused:

1563508
It's a one shot he said

That was deep. The feels... Oh god the feels...

Gah manly tears were nearly shed at this, expected or not the feels were powerful.......:ajsleepy::flutterrage::pinkiesad2::rainbowdetermined2::duck::twilightangry2::moustache:

1564269 Hehe, I have to say that I'm surprised at how many feels this gained. :moustache:

BR

I have actually not experienced feels this deep since Shutdown.

Good job, man. And good God, you're just pumping these things out, aren't you?

1564369 Yep. :ajsleepy: It won't stop. :rainbowlaugh:

Glad you liked it! :pinkiehappy: (Whenever someone says they got feels I say they liked it)

1564327
Which is funny as I've read fics here of cupcake tragic(never again god)levels with a pokerface.....meh I guess you now how to bring out the emotions that are relatable.....

1564401 To be honest, this isn't my best work in any way. You should check out some of my other stuff that is so much better than this. :rainbowwild:

Ow......right inf the feels....

That line that Twilight says "See you on the other side" hit pretty hard after reading the story. Great work.

Well gee, that was......dark :pinkiesad2: , good.....but really dark:raritydespair: I mean I used to think I was into the darker stuff, but Mother of Celestia throw a kitten or something in there! :fluttercry:

1565356 So... you WANT me to throw a poor, defenseless kitten into a swarm of deadly changelings? :duck:

>>ChaoticHarmony

Somehow I saw that one coming...:rainbowlaugh:
But I couldn't think of a better metaphor to express the sheer depressing atmosphere of this story, which is fantastic by the way, I'm definitely going to check your other works :scootangel:

Damn you I'll never listen to the theme song for ponies again without tearing up.:applecry: great story though it's good to see some original story's instead of shipfics and cupcakes knockoffs:twilightsmile:

1564369 WHY DID YOU HAVE TO POST THAT!?!?!?!? My natural curiosity took over and now the feels that I feel are really sad.

1565682 I've got tons more than just this fic, most of which are original as well. :twilightsmile:

I know that this is a sadfic written by somepony that isn't me, but,.., We Changelings would not do that.
We would, if need be, Capture instead of kill, definitely not commit genocide,..,

Like the Fic though, want more Changeling stories,..,

-Ambassador of the Changelings,
Dopple Ganger

CH, either my feels are broken, or you are getting better. Twice you have gotten my tears. Great work.

They died as true warriors, and shall be welcomed into Valhalla.

They fought well against insurmountable odds. That Twilight survived to witness their sacrifice, even for a few seconds, is good.

I read it again and once more i'm crying

1570277 Erm, good crying or bad crying?

Good crying i think this story is very good and i keep reading it and cry every time......i'm never reading it in public

Well.. that was sad.

1573770 This wasn't my best work :rainbowwild:

I have much better things

This was kind of a generic "Everybody dies" story. You literally could have thrown any liked group of characters and any enemy army in there. At least it shows you know how to write that. Still, this isn't really a story, or even a oneshot. This a fragment of a story. How would you like Halo: Reach if you only played the last level in the campaign? Poignant, but one has little attachment to the sacrifice.

1579058 Yes, I know this. It was just a little thing for the hell of it.

1579127 Sorry if I'm beating a dead horse (or six), I just want to leave sincere feedback and reduce my Read Later pile simultaneously.

You should make a prequel!:raritycry::fluttercry::pinkiesad2::facehoof::applecry::rainbowwild:

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