Hoppy Draft, proprietor and bartender of the Steady Drink, is a simple stallion of simple tastes, though most of those were directed somewhere towards alcohol. He runs a steady business at the edge of town, his customers coming from all kinds of places to get some rest from their travels. He's had every kind of creature in his place, from ponies to griffons.
But the one thing he did not expect came in the form of a soft knocking at the door during a cold, wintry evening.
Great work again CH. Ya hit me right in the feels with this one!
Much better. Not perfect. But much better. No tears but you got some feels from me.
If she was old enough to talk to the police that were taking her away, I have a hard time believing that her mother hadn't given her a name at that point.
1329163 She's been alone for years, with no one to talk to. Why would she need to remember her name? (Also, maybe she's forgotten it on purpose because of all the repressed memories about her mother) That's how I thought of it at least.
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I dunno. I could see not remembering certain things about ones past in a situation like that, but barring any *physically* traumatic events, forgetting ones name just seems a bit unlikely. Of course, she could choose to abandon her name, a sort of fresh start I guess, but forgetting seems like a bit of a stretch, like I said.
A fic taking Berry Punch seriously?
Adding to the Must Read list. I'm at nearly 80 stories now.
1329216 Whatever suits your fancy as to the reason why
1329221 I hope you enjoy it whenever you get around to it then
that... that was so much D'awwww. another magnistunmazingsome story from you. is it possible for you to hit some sort of limit or do you simply keep climbing? you are amazing. (p.s. Magnistunmazingsome is Magnificent, stunning, amazing, and awesome rolled into one)
1329270 Let us hope that the day I reach that limit will never become clear, or if it does let us pray that I can perform my
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Limit Breaker.
D'aaawww. So many feels.
+1 UP
1331530 Huzzah!
1331637 Hazzuh!
This is yet another beautiful piece of work from you. I love Berry Punch sadfics, as strange as that is. They're hard to come by, and when you do, you know to love them.
!huzzaH
Punched in the gut... With daww...