Two young Teenagers appear seemingly out of nowhere at Twilight's Crystal Castle, claiming to be from a place called Japan. They don't know how or why they were there, and neither knew why they were ponies. They said they were supposed to be humans.
Nobody really knows what to do, so they are kind of stuck in Equestria for the time being. But that doesn't stop the two from performing a certain kind of driving only exhibited by the most daring individuals.
This story is a crossover between MLP and the racing anime known as Initial D.
THIS STORY IS IRRELAVENT AND I PLAN ON OVERHAULING THE ENTIRE THING.
Chapters (23)
This is a pretty interesting story. As an Initial D fan myself, I will definitely be following this story. Keep it up! :)
Very interesting... kind of ironically, the EqG story I'm very slowly writing involves Luna being a car geek. She owns an American-spec Acura NSX.
I'm finding out about a lot of interesting Japanese cars reading this! (I'm more used to American cars, living in the central US)
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Well, I'm glad to hear it! I knew there would be a sizeable chunk of people reading that came in with little knowledge about cars, so I try to be descriptive.
I’m loving the scenes that show how the titular duo’s friends and family are reacting to their disappearance. I can feel the emotions in those scenes!
Maybe keep moving things forward as they are for another chapter or two; if writing Itsuki in is too much of a struggle at that point, then rewrite the whole thing without him.
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Alright, I'll try it. I just don't want to screw over the story just to keep one mostly useless character.
Will they be in alicorn form when the police team meet them or they all disappear with the police being in equestria i wonder what their reaction be
Thank you for putting the worry of every gear head down to paper (virtual paper? whatever) I've always struggled with this idea. like even though I love my 2003 Cadillac Deville all anyone else see's is an oversized land yacht with an overly engendered engine that blows head gaskets and strips threads after 150K.
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Thank you. I want to write Takumi as having a genuine concern for things happening to him and his 86 and generally show his bond to his 86. I think I've done a pretty good job so far.
More of this please for the absolute love of all that is holy and just. I literally just devoured this story!
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Currently working on a oneshot that is a sequel to another oneshot. I'll finish it up as soon as possible and then get right back to this!
Things are getting interesting back at Takumi's world, I'm excited to see what'll happen with a development like this.
Luna casually seeing what's happening in Takumi's world and Equestria at the same time, could this be another strange property the AE86's have, aside from disabling magic?
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Did... Did you create your account just because of this story?
If that's the case, awesome.
Wow the end here brought tears to my eyes. But seeing that confession at the end made me smile. Do I hear wedding bells in the future?
Hol up.. Is this a reference to Wangan Midnight's Devil Z?
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Mayyybe.
Really?
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Yes really. Originally it was Takumi and Twilight because, one, their names are similar. Two, they are both the absolute MAIN protagonists of their respective shows. Twilight being the lead of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, and Takumi being the lead of Initial D.
I don't know how, but for some reason I wrote Luna the way she is, and it sort of went from there. Now Takumi and Luna are hanging out together.
I dunno if it would've been better or worse had I stuck with Takumi and Twilight. But ehhhh I guess that's what theories are for.
Okay, they are going to absolutely freak when they come in and see all the blood. Something tells me he has CIPA. Meaning he is physically unable to feel pain. That is a dangerous disorder. Due to not being able to feel when the body is in danger. From physical trauma to even simply over heating or freezing. Most children with it have long stretches where they draw blood by biting their tongue. So yeah highly dangerous.
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Hm.
It was at this moment she knew, she fucked up
If I had any complaints, the dialogue gets repetitive and awkward at least so far, being in the middle of chapter 2
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Ah, thank you. I've been meaning to go back to the earlier chapters and fix them.
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No problem, I wish you the best with your story!
Clarification: if you see a bag full of money, you don’t take it for yourself. You take it to the police
I really love the thing that you do with the music, I love that you put videos with the music to play in the background as we read
I figured out there somewhere there had to be an Initial D crossover. I was a little more obscure and wrote one about Wangan Midnight.
I hope you're hyped for the MF Ghost anime next month.
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