After rehearsal for a school play goes terribly wrong, Scootaloo and Smolder end up setting the school on fire.
A commission for Gaius Stephanus Caesar
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After rehearsal for a school play goes terribly wrong, Scootaloo and Smolder end up setting the school on fire.
A commission for Gaius Stephanus Caesar
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Is this EqG world or Equestria? I'm slightly confimused.
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It's more of a passports and portal scenario. It is Equestria yes
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Cheers.
Cute stuff, but I feel like you skipped past the best part. The protagonists standing in front of a burning building usually make for a better punchline than opener. Still fun, though a bit of background on the how and why of human Scootaloo being here in her usual form would've been nice.
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Ah had to fit it all in 2500 words due to it being a commission.
This was a nice cute story, though I did get confused how Scootaloo was human, like the above commenter.