Classical Romance

This story is a sequel to A Glimmer of Love

You and Octavia Melody have been close friends for months and months. But lately, it seems that your time together has been growing shorter as Octavia sinks herself into her musical career.

On the day of her concert, you sneak backstage to find her alone, frustrated over her music. Now is the time to de-stress her, repair the broken bond, and strengthen it into something better.

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Mica

Mica #1 · Dec 25th, 2020 · 3 · ·

In… and out… In… and out… Keep on doing that for me, will you?

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Come here. I read somewhere that steady pressure and squeezing can relax you. Especially if it's coming from somepony very close to you. It can set your insides squirming with warmth and melt away your nerves.
It means I'll hug you, you simpleton. Just surrender.

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Nice fluff. I wished her relationship with Vinyl Scratch were addressed more, though.

Applefai

Applefai #2 · Dec 25th, 2020 · 1 · ·

I get what you mean; I truly do! If my best friend was this deeply sunken into her musical career, you'd want to hear from them. But us ponies are selfish and wretched creatures. We consider how we feel above all others. So why your focus on me?

Pretty good story. The above quote just needs a word added.

I think "is" needs to be between "why" and "your"

BradyBunch

BradyBunch #3 · Dec 25th, 2020 · · ·

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Thanks for sharing your thoughts. And though I agree it'd be nice to address the relationship with Vinyl, that ultimately isn't what the fic is about.

Besides, this is the first draft of something I pumped out yesterday. The idea just plowed into my head, and I quickly jotted it down.

BradyBunch

BradyBunch #4 · Dec 25th, 2020 · · ·

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I think "is" needs to be between "why" and "your"

Fixed. Thanks for telling me.

Applefai

Applefai #5 · Dec 25th, 2020 · 1 · ·

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Welcome

The_Chill_Author

The_Chill_Author #6 · Dec 25th, 2020 · 1 · ·

Happy Frieza Day!/Merry Christmas!

Jade Dawn

Jade Dawn #7 · Dec 26th, 2020 · 1 · ·

Never really ranked Octavia highly on my list of favorite secondary characters, but somehow I feel like this has given me a new appreciation for her. Somehow...

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