A Pegasister/Brony since early 2011, My name is Speda Hooves (Oc), and I love mlp. Back, and Better than Ever!
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Colledge
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Sorry, not really that good with Grammer hehehe..
DPS is not a stat ;p you should change that for endurance or stamina cause DPS is determent from the weapons you are using or cool down of spells :D Yes i read The Gamer too ;)
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DPS is Spike's personal stat actually. Dragon Power Scale. I made it up, but it's because of his DPS that'll determine him being more powerful than other Dragon people, like Garble, Smolder, and Ember. I didn't want to just be a Copycat to other stories, (though that is one of Spike's Skills xD)
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What's with adding my story to all your groups xD and I'm still working on the fourth chapter
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Mmk. If you do add it to anything else, the only classes I can think of is Gaming, Romance, and a few Harry Potter References
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Spike is Human in this EQG timeline, there isn't a portal at the moment, Twilight is still human, but with powers, and Luna Lovegood, is Princess Luna, I just borrowed the last name from Harry Potter as I've stated. Almost everyone is MLP Equestria Girls have powers, it's just not that common to awaken them. Also no offense, but can you try to spell correctly for the words you are trying to say?
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Mmk
This was a awesomely interesting beginning I can't wait to see where this goes. I hope his mom's states and hidden and be has better emotional control of the gamer mind.
This was a awesomely fun and chill chapter I'm officially hooked/hyped to see where this will go.
This was a fun and interesting chapter but short I hope they get longer in the future.
This was a epically reunion chapter I can't wait to see who he reunites with next.
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I think I already messaged you, but it IS a stat. A stat I Made up, that only Spike has. Dragon Power Scale, not Damage Per Second
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Thanks for liking my story! Again, this is my first story, so I'd like some feed back if it don't make sense to y'all.
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It's really not easy coming up with something on the fly, so 1000 words is an achievement for me in one chapter. I'll try to get better in the mean time
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What does Silent/soft touch mean?
Are you still working on this story, SpedaHooves?
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I don't know, maybe. I haven't gotten any ideas lately since I'm helping my friend with a book, designing characters, scenes, and alot more, I just never got around to my own story. So perhaps, but not yet
This is... actually pretty good so far! You led me to believe it would be way worse! Your writing skills have definitely improved since that Truth or Dare story you wrote!
How do these work? I mean, what if it combusted before it was opened? Couldn't that burn down a building? What if it combusted before its recipient was done reading it?
College
What's a Seonil?
Overall, the pacing seems a bit rushed (but learning how to get that right takes time), and there are a few mistakes and questions, but other than that, this chapter's good!
I think you meant thine
Again, pacing seems a bit rushed, and the chapters are a bit short, but other than that it's good!
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Seonil is a character from the Actual Gamer book who was the main characters best friend. And yeah I misspelled things a lot
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Yeah auto correct is an ass. I am trying to slow things down, so I'll try to do my best with the next chapter. Who do you think should be teachers out of some of the characters? None of the main 7, Starlight, Discord, or some of the rest are allowed to be teachers, but like Bulk Biceps, Shining Armor, etc.?
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I am working on a new chapter now
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Ah. I've never read the book, so I didn't know.
Cheerilee
Sapphire Shores
Iron Will
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Agree with all, though I'd swap out Sapphire Shores with Ms Harshwhinny (Gotta fill up the cliche strict professor role)
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Thanks for your Suggestions. You may also advise on future teachers, whoever they might be. There around Twenty-twenty Five teachers that are not anonymous. So far this is will be Seven teachers, 1 VP, 1 P, so that will leave 11-16 others for staff
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While I love the Strict Professors in stories (Like Snape for example) you also gotta find that loving side to them. Not everyone is a bad person/pony. I'll definitely think about Ms. Harshwhinney, but there is still two to three days before I post the next one, so there is time to decide
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Iron Will is kinda a PE teacher to me, and that slots already filled up. Any ideas for what he could be that could convince me to put him in?
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Cranky Doodle (Algebra)
Novo (Water elements)
Chrysalis (biology)
Discord (drama)
Raven Inkwell (English)
Rockhoof (Earth elements)
Zecora (chemistry)
Meadowbrook (botany)
Flash Magnus (Air elements)
Stygian (astronomy)
Somnambula (social science)
I need It!!!!
good job so far
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Woah those are a lot of names already. Well, For most of these they sound good, but I'm thinking of making Cadence and Chrysalis share both biology and Sex Ed.
Discord isn't a teacher, nor will he be. He'll be a student
More... MOAR!!... if you don't mind that is...
This was a fun and interesting return chapter. As for teachers Grand pear and maybe hopefully Buttercup and Bright Mac.
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Y'know I didn't expect people to be all that interested in my story?
Alright, I'll make more
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Nope, no, and no. They aren't teachers and that is final. They are farmers through and true
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Why would they be dead? Just read when I post, and no demanding
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Mostly because they are in most fics and I didn't mean to be demanding sorry.😥😓
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And no offense, but when you text on someone's story try to have some decent grammar so we can understand what you'll be saying or asking
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My WiFi has been out and I'm literary am texting my reviews.
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I'm making a new story, if that'll satisfy your interest until I decide if I'll continue this book. I might make a poll to ask if I should from the readers. Hmm ...
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Got a new story I'm writing, if y'all are interested
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With you, Emerald, I'm asking if you think I should go back, repair the book, and continue it?
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Already replied on your blog post thingie
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I got it SOUL-Sister lol
Let me guess, Ember, Gabby or Gilda, Sunset Shimmer, and Octavia?
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Pretty close assumptions. Let's see if you are right
You guessed most of them correct xD
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Wanna guess again? You only need to change one of the four there