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I am loving this so far and can't wait to see where this goes this had a fun and interesting beginning.
Wow this was a epic and fun chapter all I I can say is I'm happy Sunset changed back and that I feel for her and understand by she changed.
Very interesting on making Twilight the main character this time around. I am curious on how your gonna introduce Spike in this one, though at the same time, I'm a little worried that your gonna have him completely steal the spotlight from her once he does show up.
This story is great!
The team is gaining momentum and new teammates!
This was a awesomely wild and fun chapter, I'm happy Pinkie joined the team. I wonder who's will join next.
Will we get a prequel story elaborating on this?
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Only if this story is successful
This was epic and fun chapter 1 I'm happy Fluttershy is not only ok and those assholes got what they day deserved. I'm also happy she joined the team and there new overall scores. I can't wait to see who joins the team next.
Slowly but growing to a formidable team!
Man I Love This Story So Far
Here’s what I think is gonna happens next after forming the team, Twilight and Sunset went to the dragonlands and there they meet Dragon Lord Torch and Ember, and ember is a leader of the most popular and strongest gladiator team of Dragons in Equestria, and the best one is none other than Spike who is the smartest, powerful, handsome, and strongest
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Maybe, maybe not, the only way of knowing is to keep reading, I'll make it worth your time
Maybe Spike is a 'Diamond in the Rough'?
Awesome. Good chapter and glad to see Sunset good again
Woot! This was a lore/ action packed chapter. Love it
This was a beyond epically heart pumping lore chapter, this was a blast. Looks like AJ mite be next.
Aj in coming and I suspect a sunset vs Big Mac rematch
Epic
1) Don't you mean Braeburn? Bright Mac is Applejack and Big Mac's father.
2) Also, I noticed that this story is in the Spike's Harems group, but so far, we haven't seen a single sign of Spike. Will he appear soon?
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Maybe also, thanks for pointing that out, type half of this chapter on my phone, autocorrect came in.
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Define "Maybe".
Pegasy is plural, and it's with a "I".
You need a proofreader.
1) You mentioned Pinkie twice. Was Fluttershy supposed to say that last line?
2) Did you mean Twilight? It sounds like RD was talking to herself.
1 Those were Pinkie's lines, 2) my bad
Epic nuff said
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You also forgot Rainbow Dash's BWH measurements.
1) Sorry, misinterpreted.
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Sorry, being a bit lazy
I though she hate pies: the deserts not the family.
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Wait and see, it'll all make sense
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Well, that hasn't changed... much
Still excited for this and overlord to update there gonna be good
What is this a crossover of?
Love this and you got me there was not expecting old man Red to be used
Hahahahaha
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Red isn't Redsopine, he is yet to make a debut, he'd be around Spike's age... I actually left a small spoiler about him.
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Ah il need to re read but yikes gonna need google translate for half this chapter
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Just making it "adequet" enough to set the environment
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True
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Also what spoiler lol
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Someone told Spike to register, am I right?
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Intersting
(accent) One long, extravagantly, compelling, must-see, tale of a story later.
If you need to borrow an OC, let me know.
Really hope you'll continue this story.
So can Xochi in next chapter ?