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Wait so is she human with xenojiva armor instead of just being the xenojiva, or does she transform?
Intresting
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She's not wearing armor I can tell you that.
Don't want to give away too much though
Just like with the previous version, you have caught my attention
Wow...ok I see you well I can say that I look forward for the next chapter
Not a bad intro but your prose are very weak. The big thing that stuck out of me was the sheer repition I saw and you should avoid using the same word more then once. This helps with flow, and makes your sentances all around better. Obviously words like 'the' 'and' 'I' are exempt from this rule.
Not bad... kinda liked to original idea better. This feels.... less? Will still read just I don't know man legit Xeno in Equestria was a bit more interesting to me.
When is the next chapter
When is the next chapter coming out?
come on do the next chapter
come on its time for a new chapter
update it
Will continue?