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A story with potential.
Personally I think the pacing is a bit to fast but I like where it goes and it is an interesting time to start. So far I have never found a story starting with the founding of Ponyville.
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it's more a brainstorm than a chapter, the original is twice as long.
In the future i will going to fix it :v
Hope to see more
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;v
Continue please. This is getting interesting
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the chapter should not have been published yet, tomorrow it will be well edited, but this month I will write this story xD
‘‘Tis is getting good. Please continue
Ever onward turn the infernal engines of immortal creatures, their machinations grinding unceasingly into eternity. They render mortal plans and schemes to naught but dust and ash. But, should the immortal be cast upon the mortal plain, mortal souls can change its course. There, it can be brought to a halt, as all machinations are wont to do. Sputter, stall and die.
On the mortal plain, even the immortal can perish, leaving naught to be remembered.
But, mortal machinations, mortal souls... they live on, if only in memory.
What's a brok? It doesn't even come up on my spellcheck.
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Brok is a Dwarf of Nidevilar who with his brother Sindri forged mystical weapons for the Aesir. He was the one that helps make both Gungnir and Mioljnir or Thor's Hammer.
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Didn't they also make a fold up boat that could fly, then sewed loki's mouth shut because Odin wouldn't let them kill him.
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Yep xD
WOW! I love it! It's new and original too! So glad I found this one.
Shit.
Aw there isn't another chapter. But I will wait can't wait for another chapter!
YAY! I'm glad there's another chapter !
I see now why this story has no dislikes. It's because this is an awesome story. I love it I can't believe how long I have been putting of reading this thinking it would not be very interesting. I was so wrong this is amazing
Update?