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Majestical4729


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Hearts and Hooves Day arrives at the School of Friendship, and Head-mare Starlight decided that the school will celebrate the occasion with confessing to their friends about how their relationships mean to them.
Gallus, having a bit of romantic feelings for Silverstream, struggles to figure out a way to confess how he views their relationship . Will he make a good confession before it is too late?


I am rather neutral with Gallustream, just like I am neutral with most of the ships, but I still wish that it can become cannon alongside many opposite sex couples.

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It's a cute story, but there are quite a few spelling mistakes and a lot of the language is clunky, to coin a phrase.

For example, having Trixie speak in third person then telling us that she's speaking in third person is entirely redundant.

that have not become cannon

On the flip side, I finally know another writer who ships Gallus and Silverstream.

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Is that a M777 155mm howitzer?

And did you hear one guy said "Get outta the way"

Oh it looks like hearts and Hooves Day is here and everyone is pretty excited well almost everyone gallus is pretty nervous about this day poor kid but I'm sure his friends will help them out especially silverstream 🥰

“Um, Gallus? Was that a blush I saw on your face?” Ocellus asked, noticing the griffon’s red cheeks.

Well I mean she can sense love from gallus so she does knows about it

“I don’t know! All this talking about love...just...I can’t say it!” he panicked.

Oh boy gallus is really not having a good day he's really having a hard time trying to express his feeling but he can't especially towards silverstream well let's see if Trixie can help him

The one creature whom Gallus was uncomfortable of admitting his views about his relationship with, was... her .

Ding ding ding we have a winner and yeah he really is nervous around you and it's not because he doesn't like you he just doesn't know how to say

"Um, Silverstream? You...actually don't have to." the cyan changeling then pointed to the crowd of ponies in the Main Hall, making the two lovers realise that they just admitted their feelings for each other in front of the entire school!

Oops well then this is awkward lol 😆

He then took a step backward, not noticing a small needle from Rarity's stitching class that was hiding there. Upon getting poked by its sharp edge, Gallus screamed in pain while leaping forward, resulting his first kiss with Silverstream, as his beak made contact with hers.

Aww lol that is so cute and funny at the same time I love it especially in that scene in Bambi 2 I like that part

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Well it looks like the day has arrived bottom fortunately silverstream is very emotional drain right now because she thought that gallus doesn't like her but as soon he made it his friends were pretty upset with him but then he had to explain that this was a misunderstanding that he actually did truly cares about her he just didn't know how to say it and I took him long enough to admit it that he really truly loves her even though they say that in the opening lol but then after that they went to the room and talk about this whole situation was pretty silly and then he accidentally gave her a kiss even though he got poked which it was adorable and painful but anyway this was a really sweet Valentine's Day or Hearts and Hooves Day and I want to see how the relationship go's 😊

Aww this was a very nice story of gallus and silverstream and I ship those two so much they are so cute together so it looks like during the event of the last problem it looks like gallus became the captain of the royal guard and him and her got three kids which that amazing and it looks like you tried to connect it to your other story but other than that I think this was a pretty good story good job and keep up the good work 😊

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