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Majestical4729


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Some years before the future setting in 'The Last Problem', and after the coronation, the Cake Twins had grown up to become preteens, and were left alone in Sugar Cube Corner by their parents one night, while Pinkie Pie and her husband Cheese Sandwich were having a sleepover at her family Rock Farm.

The twins winded up locking the whole place up after reading an influential story about burglary, and mistaking their parents who banged on the doors for burglars.


This is my twelfth overall story, and the first to be inspired by both a movie, (which is the 1990 movie Home Alone in this case) and a TV Show episode (which is the Mickey and the Roadster Racers episode Garage Alone)

It is also the third story on Fimfiction that I had created the cover art image through non-digital art.

I actually wanted to involve Pinkie Pie and Cheese Sandwich, but because I could not make up my mind about how old Lil'Cheese could be when the events of this story unfold, I decided that Pinkie and her family should be uninvolved.

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Comments ( 16 )

"And that means that you two...will be home alone!" Mr Cake finished, sounding worried in his tone.

Well this is a very interesting promises and it's really cool to see the cake twins finally growing up aside from the last problem which this is before the future events this is like between the coronation and the last problem but anyway it looks like mr. And mrs. Cake are on a special delivery so pound and pumpkin cake are home alone at least both of the parents told them they were leaving unlike what happened in the Home Alone movie even though that was just basically panic and they would not thinking too well while they were trying to get to the airport but anyway they should be very interesting how these kids do they are home alone

Well then this was a pretty interesting turn of event so they were just basically reading a home alone comic and the real burglar comes around being chased by the royal guard I wonder who Could That Be

After the Cakes were out of sight, one of the guards asked in confusion, "Who leaves babies home alone?"

Well little do they know the cake twins are actually preteens just saying

Well it looks like mr. And mrs. Cake return from the delivery but hearing the burglar from the Royal Guards make those two very worried about their kids something tells maybe this is going to be a misunderstanding on the cake twins huh

Oh boy I knew it this is going to be a mistake identity and now the parents are probably going to get the booby traps 😅

Oh boy it looks like the cake twins already set up the traps and the parents doesn't even know what was going on nor does the twins either

Outside, Mr and Mrs Cake, who were still covered in flour due to the first trap, had a grappling hook stuck onto the roof of Sugar Cube Corner. With helmets and safety gear, the two grown-ups were climbing on the rope with Mrs Cake in the lead.

Wait a minute where the heck did they get a grappling hook from? Lol

It looks like mr. And mrs. Cake are going to to climb up to the window but little do they know the cake twins are going to set up the Trap upstairs which this is not going to end well

But the very nest second, a barrel tied to a rope that was hung on a suction hook with its round circular area facing the window came flying her way, hitting her square on the face and sending her falling onto her husband, and back onto the ground.

That trap kind of reminds me of Home Alone 3 when Alex through the water balloon or whatever white stuff to the bad guy that was pretty funny

Ouch that's gotta hurt the cake twins are going to be so much in trouble lol

Dang lol so mrs. Cake ask one of the Yaks to break down the door I mean it makes sense but also very extreme but it worked

"And bobby-trapped the place to keep us out!" Mrs Cake ended dramatically.

Booby trap

"We understand your actions now, little cakes. You have every reason to lock up the place because here's danger near. But you winded up locking us out, that's why we tried to climb and enter by the window."

Don't you mean wounded up

Well it looks like they finally got inside the house even though they had to break it down and the twins realize it was their parents and I apologize for what they did to them but they forgave them but the twins really want to make it up to them for putting them such pain to get inside the house well this was a pretty interesting story

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