You gotta kick at the darkness until it bleeds daylight.
“Must it take a life for hateful eyes,/To glisten once again,/’Cause we find ourselves in the same old mess,/Singin' drunken lullabies.” –Flogging Molly, ‘Drunken Lullabies’
After being mocked by his best friend Caramel for still being single, Pokey Pierce encounters a pony named Berry Punch. Despite just wanting to make sure she doesn't hurt herself in her intoxicated state, Pokey notices that Berry seems to be sticking around the blue unicorn.
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Interesting. This has caught my attention, so I'll continue reading.
Nice. Getting increasingly interesting...
Mmmmm.... Tasty...
The suspense is palpable...
Yum.
D'awwwww!
Awwww. So cute. I liked this story. Sure, there could be a few improvements here and there, but overall, very nice and cute.
I approve.
D'awwwwww
'Oh, hello there mister unicorn!'
Best introduction to a pony you don't know ever.
... Berry Punch, you are now one of the best ponies in existance.
Ah, I'm loving Berry Punch.
So cute!!! Cuteness is overflowing!!!
You need to add an epilogue...
You should continue this, also can you make your chapters a little longer seems rushed
So cute! Well written, nice plot, (not that kind lol) and nice interpretation of how The Punch would be when drunk. I would say this is
-able. 
DATE RAPE DATE RAPE
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That'd be funny
You sir, gets a moustache for your goodness