Twilight discovers that she is a direct descendant of Discord. (Takes place before S3... Obviously.)
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I used to write. Depression killed that for years. I might get back to it someday.
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MORE!
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This is very interesting. It is very rare to find this type of concept in this fimfiction website. I can only imagine this would happen. Not an error as I see but put more dialogue and needs to be tad longer in my opinion. I will be watching this.
Yes, I like this. I shall read more!
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Oh, this is gonna be good.
lol
It hurts oh it hurts
this is awesome keep it up
It needs to be longer, I want more.
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1729950
Wait, if her family line began with Discord, then why were there so many generations of Earth ponies and mild-magicked unicorns before Twilight came along? One would think the inherited power of a godlike being would show itself before hundreds of generations of genetic and arcane dilution took place.
1731189
You are involving logic with Discord. You are fighting a losing battle.
1731386
Ah, but I am willing to argue this point until nothing makes sense any more.
Oh boy, things have gotten interesting
O Mah Gawd! 0 dislikes so far! I have cursed myself by saying this.
1731189 Discord's awesomeness is recessive.
*ahem* after many debates and tests of poking the screen with a stick i have concluded that this story makes too much fucking sense. therefore... HOLY BANANA JESUS ON A TRACTOR HOW DID WE MISS THE SIGNS?
i will now go on a journey of table flipping wish me luck.
please continue... for science of course
Fucking rad.
1729950 What was that you were saying, I think you need to consider speech therapy.
Hurry and right more! This is awesome!
MORE PLEASE.
damn, this is getting good.
Twilight Sparkle was the only Unicorn in her bloodline to experience a sonic rainboom. And she turned her parents into potted plants afterwards.
My question is: Who was Discord's mate?
1735982 Can't tell u yet.... Itsa secret.
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Incoming Lesson Zero breakdown. This will not end well. Keep up the good work
The only critique I have is that Celestia seems to have gone a bit...overboard, with alerting the guards and such. She's usually incredibly calm and poised, I'd think she'd simply just fly off to Ponyville and tell Twilight herself that she can't see what's on the page. *shrug*
Oh well, I'm still interested. Hopefully, learning her lineage won't cause the ponyverse to implode...right?
1740575 Celestia went overboard because it was her mistake. She never makes mistakes, especially concerning Twilight, so it's a big deal. Plus, she knows how Twi will react, so she needs a little backup. Seriously, in the state Twilight's in, she could do some serious damage.
1741664 Patience, dear brony.
1736257 Let me guess... it's Celestia!
And more importantly, how can a PONY be descended from a DRACONEQUUS? They are different species!
1745031 One could argue that technically Discord is a chimera, and therefore due to having some of a lot of animals in him, could reproduce with any species. After all the word Draconequus means "Dragon-Horse".
And as for how the Earth ponies came before Twilight, I just assumed that the Sparkle family wasn't anything special until Discord got involved, which was recently... But then again he was trapped in stone for a thousand years so that doesn't work...
OH WELL, ITS MAGIC!
1745031 1. Not 'Tia. Nope. No Celestia relative for Twi.
2. This particular Draconequus is chaos incarnate. Who cares if it don't make sense? Plus, his mate was pony, and pony is dominant. Draconequus is recessive.
1746768 Actually, Discord was the start of her family line. Him and a strange little mare. not telling yet who it is.
This fic just gets better and better!
As a writer myself I have to say you've put everyone in a correct character light.
Also no complaints about the chapter length. (I couldn't do better that's for sure!)
Anyway keep it up!
1747429 Thank you!
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BAD RACIST SPARKLE!
Also, I love how some random guard knows exactly what Celestia is talking about. Does everyone in Canterlot know the Sparkle family is descended from Discord except Twilight?
1747548 Just Celestia, Luna, Celestia's guards, and Luna's guards.
Ugh. Hinted Dislestia. Hate that ship. Still an interesting read, though I'm curious just what the guards could do that Celestia herself couldn't.
I keep clicking Upvote
but it;s only upvoting once D:
1747573 Does that include Shining Armor? You think that would be something he would mention in one of his oh-so-frequent visits with her.
"Hey sis, good job defeating the personification of chaos and disharmony. So how was Great-great-great-great-great-great-howevermanytimes-grampa doing?"
Yeah, communication's not really his strong point.
Celestia tell me the truth, were you Discord's wife?
1747580 Not Dislestia, although I agree with it. It's somepony else. Not 'Tia.
1747644 No! Never! Not Even Once! It wasn't Tia.
1747608 Shining was just told when they went to her house.
1747653 Well then, was it Celestia and Luna's MOTHER?
LOL. Discord+Celestia=Twi. I TOTALLY saw that in Celestia's reaction!