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darf


pony-writer/pornographer looking for work. old stories undeleted. i'm sorry. Patreon here

Comments ( 8 )

Loved this story :pinkiehappy: But I was just wondering if you were ever going to do a chapter 1.5, showing Desmona fully claiming Applebloom?

It's good to see you're back and recovered after everything: Here's hoping for continued forward progress and more good times with fillies! :scootangel:

...although I guess in this story's case it's less :scootangel: and more like the opposite. :V

Thanks a lot for your submissions, darf. I'm happy to say you're the winner of my foalcon contest! This story really blew me away! Below will be my full review. In regards to accepting your prize, I ask that you first read my blog post. I will contact you.


Style 10/10
Characterization 10/10
Each CMC had their personality traits clearly defined and all acted differently. The scene with the batpony was really mysterious and her character intrigued me.
Creativity 10/10
What a unique idea.
Writing 10/10
Great writing as always.
Sex Scene 20/20
A stellar performance and I can't find a single thing wrong with it. It really blew me away how fresh everything stayed even after numerous orgasms.
Exposition 20/20
Very believable for the CMC.
Climax 20/20
Amazing.
Total Score 100/100
I literally cannot find a single thing wrong with, or that I don't like about this fic. The scene with the bat pony sex-goddess was so vivid and mesmerizing. It's so well written, every character feels lively and the scenes really pop. I wouldn't have called myself much of a futa fan before I read this fic, but this was such a good experience that I'm second-guessing myself now.

Thanks once again.

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