Silver's Secret Sack

PiMan

PiMan #1 · Feb 28th, 2015 · · ·

Filthy is Diamond's dad, for future reference.

Edit: oh, and I think "a bit of forced sex" is understating it. You have two sex scenes: one masturbation and one rape, where the rape is the more important scene to the story. Sure, the scene is short, but "a bit" implies either that the force is minor (such as with consensual domination) or that there is far more unforced sex in comparison.

Shizuo35

Shizuo35 #2 · Feb 28th, 2015 · · ·

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5680505 Thanks for the mind derp. BTW I hit the target on the head ;A; DT and Filthy Rich... Ho--lee-sheit... Anyways just thanks :3

Ultima Nitro

Ultima Nitro #3 · Mar 1st, 2015 · · ·

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Like you didn't make this a juicy clopfic on purpose. What are clopfics for anyway?

Shizuo35

Shizuo35 #4 · Mar 1st, 2015 · · ·

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5685191 I don't understand what you're saying...

ErisHDiscordia

ErisHDiscordia #5 · Mar 4th, 2015 · 1 · ·

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Making it 15 likes, broke the like tie.

Ultima Nitro

Ultima Nitro #6 · Mar 5th, 2015 · 1 · ·

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It's cool, that's all i'm saying.

Crescent Glaive

Crescent Glaive #7 · Jun 20th, 2015 · · ·

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Disliked because that was against my morals in the end.

But otherwise good story so that saves this story from being too bad but still a dislike.
Sorry for the dislike but keep up the good work and maybe next time it might be a like or neutral reaction

SWEETOLEBOB18

SWEETOLEBOB18 #8 · Apr 22nd, 2019 · · ·

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Scootaloo giggled a bit. "Nah I did!" She said. "Sweetie Belle cant (apostrophe) cook and Ryder's busy trying to learn a cider recipe to help Applebloom and her sister while her brother is in the hospital. Even I cant believe he broke a leg falling from the school roof." They stopped in front of a house. Scoot's home. "Anyways thanks again!"

Diamond Tiara gave a grin and laughed. "Friends?!" She said. "I'm your BEST friend! Those... 'Friends' of yours haven't even learned what they do best and that little chicken you were with still cant (apostrophe) fly!" Silver Spoon tried speaking up but DT brushed by her. "Come on my daddy said you can come over for a sleep over!"

Silver spoon (capitalize) got in her face. "I said FUCK. OFF!" She replied. "You are NO FRIEND! For one every time I hang out with the Cutie Mark Crusaders and you catch me you call them names and expect me to do the same! Next I tell you secrets which YOU spread to your other 'friends' whom I haven't even met! You are a BITCH! A prissy. Little. BITCH! "

Diamond Tiara fell silent. She was shocked at what Silver Spoon had said to her and called her. The door to Scootaloo's home opened and standing there was Ryder, Scootaloo's older brother looking quite mad. Scootaloo hid behind him looking as if she were crying or scared. Ryder looked down at Diamond tiara (capitalize). "Calling my sister and her friends names?" He said. Diamond Tiara stammered a bit. "AH! I don't wanna hear ANY excuses! You are coming with me and I'm telling your father!" He grabbed the fillies (filly's) hoof and got his sister onto his back before closing the door and walking with them both down the road.

Silver spoon (capitalize) straightened herself out and fixed her glasses. "Yes daddy!" She said. She averted her gaze a bit blushing. "...Its coming back again..."

Her father gave a sigh. "I still cant (apostrophe) believe you chose to being (be) a mare ….(rather)….than a colt..." He said taking her hoof. "...I love you nonetheless but you have to remember to take those vitamins that keep that little problem in check!"

They started up the stairs as her father looked down at her. "Well do be careful next time. One fault and your mothers (apostrophe) curse becomes as clear as day!" He said. They walked on the upper floor towards a hallway. It was a nicely decorated with a few tables with vase's (no apostrophe) on each. Each vase had a rose bush coming from the top. They didn't look any more real as (than) a plastic barrette would. "Alright now you go on into your room and wait for me to come back with your vitamins. I'll have to go out to get them. I'll bring two bottles back. One as a backup for any mishaps with the vitamins!"

Silver spoon nodded breaking away from her father. She ran down the hall, her little hooves giving muffled clacking against a carpeted tiled floor. She darted into a half open door and closed it behind her. Inside was her room. A big round bed with a netting around it. Stuffed animals and toys covered the floor and sat on her bed near her pillow. "...I really need to keep track of those vitamins..." She said to herself pulling the veil aside. She hopped onto her bed and grabbed a stuffed animal holding it close. She looked between her legs and saw a fully developed stallions (apostrophe) scrotum. A puckered hole sat near her little filly teats hiding. "...I wonder..." She reached down and massaged the scrotum. Jumping a bit she blushed harder. "...Feels weird..." She lied (lay) down on the bed and lifted the fleshy ball up. She reached past it and felt her fillyhood still sitting on back where it should be. Some of her juices got onto her hoof as she whimpered pushing into it a bit. Starting to rub it she bit her teddy bear whimpering.

The maid gave a smile. "Yes I know." She said. "Did you drink any while you were there?" Silver Spoon nodded hesitantly. "Well I know what wont (apostrophe) happen tonight. You know what I'm talking about don't you?" Again the filly nodded. "Anything you'd like to drink specifically?"

The chef pony got up and pushed the chair back in. "Your fathers (apostrophe) here and I wanna keep workin' so's I don't lose my job." He said. "Besides I gotta get your fathers (apostrophe) meal as well. Now eat up!"

Her dad nodded. "...I'm afraid so sweetie..." He said. "I cant (apostrophe) keep you home from school but I can help you cover yourself up. Just wear one of your dresses tomorrow! Does that one from your cutesinerra still fit?"

The maid sighed and got up from the bed. "Right away miss (capitalize) spoon (capitalize)." She said.

The filly on her back gave a giggle. "Don't worry I wont (apostrophe) say anything!" She said. "Now... About my secret... I'm kinda... Different than the other fillies... It's not my glasses or my dads (apostrophe) wealth but... My mom had a curse put on her before she was... You know... and I started to grow stuff the colts have... A penis and uh..." She looked down at her hooves and mumbled to herself.

Luna thought for a moment. "A little extra baggage and a friend not wanting to lose friends..." She said. "...I suggest you try and see what you can do to get Applebloom to become your friend. If it involves that little colts (apostrophe) thing it might help. If you're too embarrassed about it just take a big breath and take Applebloom aside or somewhere private. Understand?"

Luna thought yet again. "... I... I cant (apostrophe) really think of anything else other than that Silver..." She said sounding a bit scared. "...I hate to do this but... You can probably think of something... I'll leave you to wake up... Again very sorry!" Luna brought the filly off of her back. Her horn glowed and everything disappeared even Luna herself.

Silver looked up at him. "Well..." She said trying to think of her answer quickly. "...I'm thinking its (apostrophe) my appearance that's making Applebloom avoid me... I wanna come on friendly and well... Not too mean...?" She averted her gaze a bit.

Her brother rolled his eyes. "Fine just don't do it again. If you cant (apostrophe) sleep you either wake me up and we'll do something or you just crawl in bed with me." He said. He looked down at Silver Spoon. "You know Silver you are welcome to come over for a sleep over. Just have Scoot ask me and your father and walk right on over. I'll be happy to get you in!"

Ryder smiled as Scootaloo let go and went into the crowd of students. Not even a few minutes after they got there the bell rang. Every colt and filly went for their class. Once inside the classroom Silver Spoon went straight for her seat. Scootaloo and Sweetie belle took their seats as well. As things started to calm down Silver noticed her teacher, Miss Cheerilee wasn't there. Neither was Applebloom or Diamond Tiara for that matter. She looked back at Sweetie Belle and gave her a quizzical look. She shrugged. A sigh was heard from the door and Silver reset herself facing the front once more. There coming through the door was Miss Cheerilee, Applebloom who was wearing a dress for some reason and Diamond Tiara looking a bit smug. "Sorry I'm late class." Cheerilee said. "I had to deal with a problem in the teachers (apostrophe) lounge. Not enough coffee in the pot."

"Problem?" Silver asked. "...Can you tell me your problem please...? You tell me and I'll... Tell you mine... I promise I wont (apostrophe) say shit!" She blushed and looked towards the toilet paper roller.

Diamond Tiara saw Silver and approached her. "YOU!" She said pissed. "Just because of your little 'talk' with me outside that blankflanks (apostrophe) house I got in trouble for having a potty mouth!"

Diamond Tiara stopped in her tracks and looked behind her. There she saw the Cutie Mark Crusaders sporting evil grins. "...W-what are you blankflank's (no apostrophe) gonna do...? You cant (apostrophe) possibly hurt me!" She said trying not to be scared.

A semi-loud poof came behind Diamond Tiara. She looked behind her yet again and saw Silver Spoon with her cock fully erect as well. "You better hope you don't use any teeth... Other wise (one word) someone's gonna get stomped out..." She said. She sounded hesitant. She only knew that saying because she heard older ponies such as Scootaloo's brother and the guards say that.

Suddenly Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo pounced on Diamond Tiara forcing her to the ground. Sweetie Belle used her magic and forced Diamond Tiara's mouth open. "Here Silver... If theres any teeth you can blame me on that." She said as Applebloom mounted the scared rich filly. "Hope this slut doesn't choke! I wouldn't even be surprised if she sucked her dads (apostrophe) dick for lunch money!"

Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle backed away just as Silver Spoon and Applebloom got their dresses back on. Diamond Tiara just lied (lay) there and curled up starting to sob lightly. One by one each forcing filly ran out of the alley leaving Diamond Tiara to lie in the grime of a dark alley, moist with saliva, bleeding from her marehood and with a bad taste in her mouth. Hours later Silver Spoon was walking with her father around the halls at home. Applebloom, Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo were with her. Each filly wore a nightgown bulging with something. "Thank's for lettin' us stay here Mr. Bronze!" Applebloom said.

Sweetie Belle stepped forward. "I-it was Snips and Snails..." She said scared. "...W-we saw them and....(they)….. threatened to do it to us too! They're always causing trouble!" She whimpered and hugged Scootaloo.

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