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AndwhatIseeisme
I write stories mainly featuring small horses having sex with one another, and that is probably all you really need to know about me.
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Cannot say that snuff and gore is my thing, but it's a well-written exercise nonetheless.
That was amazing!
I just about died OOOOMFG
For as dark and fucked up as this was, I got a lotta laughs out of it. So I’ll give it a like for that alone.
Incredibly funny and good characterization, take my like!
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Please keep in mind, I know I can be overly critical and negative at times. I can always find something to nitpick, even in the greatest works of literature ever written. Please don't take it personally!
-Interesting to see relatively harmless torture porn.
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"Wait a second, don't I get a say in who I want to fuck or not?" Tirek asked. / "NO!"-- this exchange is repeated from Always Be Conceiving.-I'm really unclear why Cozy Glow would be so enthusiastic about being repeatedly torture-fucked to death. I guess there's the thing about learning what hurts ponies the most ... but that seems fairly low reward, given how terrible the price is. In her position, wouldn't you rather just not get tortured to death and instead save the torture experimentation for when you have other ponies to experiment on?
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The look n her eyes-- there's a typo n this sentence.-Weirdly wholesome for what it is.
-Not subtle at all about things -- could have dragged the torture out much more.
-Chrysalis' bad acting is funny.
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Cloppability: 75/100
Allure: 80/100
Enticement: 90/100
Immersion: 85/100
Prose Quality: 89/100
Total Score: 419/500
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Awww, so close to another 420 score. Oh well.
Yeah, to be honest this was kind of hard for me to write and I think it shows in a failure to fully commit to the gorn. I very much enjoy reading stories featuring such themes, but when it came to writing them I ended up almost feeling sorry for the characters. In the end, somehow my torture porn story ended up being more of a comedy than anything, and I'm not sure what that says about me.