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DangerDean


Known as the British Speedfreak, friend of Rainbow Dash, nemesis of Oscura Galaxia and contributor to Burnout Crossovers.

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When a pegasi stallion sees a LMP style car in Paradise City... a tale that will change Paradise City forever will begin!

This story was heavily inspired by Akula966's Burnout Equestrian Paradise story, I recommend you read all of the current chapters, especially chapter 9!

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 48 )

What's LMP stand for? Did you mean MLP?

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No, LMP stands for Le-Mans Prototype

The moment I laid eyes on this, I fell for it, hook, line and sinker. Nice job!

Although, I do have a few editing pointers...

Danger saw a car travelling on the interstate that had a familiar feeling. He then accelerated a bit to take a closer look. It was a carbon version of a Krieger Überschall 8 and he thought to himself, “What is it doing here? I better doing something.”

If I remember correctly, we agreed on Oscura driving an Uberschall Clear-View.

Danger turned to see who made that voice and saw a purple Krieger 616 Sport parked next to the Überschall. He noticed it was another one of his friends, Starlight Glimmer. “Starlight... Wha... What are you doing here?” Danger exclaimed. Starlight approached him as Oscura was prepared to fire the Desert Eagle at his head. “Oscura?” But she was at breaking point. “ SHUT UP!!! ” She demanded. Normally, ponies would stop aggrivating Oscura’s anger. But, Starlight refused her demand. “Oscura, I mean it!, if you fire that gun... You will be teleported to Equestria and you will be locked in Tartarus for the rest of your life, and you will kill the British Speedfreak himself.”

In Paradise, Starlight actually drives a Carson 500 GT Racing (sorry that I forgot to tell you)

But other than that, I'll keep an eye on this story, and spread the word!

Comment posted by DangerDean deleted Feb 11th, 2020

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Oh btw, I did get held at gunpoint by Oscura.

Oh my, well. I'm not the only one who thinks Starlight should drive a Racing 500 GT What a coincidence. Is this completely seperate from the other story or will this the in eventually?

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I'm not sure but a guestimate tells me it's separate, but the rest mane 6 i.e. Twilight, Pinkie, Rarity etc. won't appear until later on.

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Now that I think of it, I did tell Akula that I had Starlight in that car. And I see those comments. I assume this is based on the other story right? It just needs to catch up since Dash is still in her P12 and is just fine.

Ah nevermind, good work though.

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I also think the few chapters of this is set before Twilight enters Paradise City, I might want to make that clear and don't worry, Rainbow will still be in the P12.

Ok that actual clears up A lot. Not sure I mentioned this but Viral appears shortly after Twilight gets her Cavalry. She kind of just hangs out by the stadium practicing something unique when Akula's groupnraces past. At least, that's the idea.

Don't be, I'm fine with it. I was under the assumption that every character has a unique vehicle. But with only 75 cars that may be tough to pull off.

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That depends. Is chapter 3 going to be another Search for Allies?

Danger turned to see who made that voice and saw a purple racing edition of the Carson 500 GT parked next to the Überschall. He noticed it was another one of his friends, Starlight Glimmer. “Starlight... Wha... What are you doing here?” Danger exclaimed. Starlight approached him as Oscura was prepared to fire the Desert Eagle at his head. “Oscura?” But she was at breaking point. “ SHUT UP!!! ” She demanded. Normally, ponies would stop aggrivating Oscura’s anger. But, Starlight refused her demand. “Oscura, I mean it!, if you fire that gun... You will be teleported to Equestria and you will be locked in Tartarus for the rest of your life, and you will kill the British Speedfreak himself.”

The 500 GT is actually pink, because Starlight's coat is light pink. (This was RDgamer's idea, so give him the credit)

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Why don't you use that idea in your take-on-events story idea?

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Really, I must have had my shades on when creating that line?

What can do to make Oscura… well... apocalyptically mad?

I'm sorry, but the term is Facehoof. Regardless, I think I'm starting to enjoyn your silly style of writing. Misery is funny.

Not what I was expecting, but still pretty good.

Also, I love the reference to the Hunter's cars from the offline Marked Mare.

Wait, Twilight. What... tf :rainbowhuh:

Twilight what are you doing here?!

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So, you don't know why Twilight is here? :rainbowhuh:

Approaching towards them was a blue Carson GT Concept, a dark green Hunter Spur and a Rossolini LM Classic in pearlescent purple and they parked about eight feet away from the front of Rainbow’s P12.

It turns out... a ponified version of the Dazzlings somehow, with the Elite licenses, are in Paradise City. Danger quickly reconized one of them, as they were approaching to the red Tempesta. “Hi, Danger!” greeted one of them, preferably the one driving the Hunter Spur. “Now, how long will it be before they hypnotise the three of us.” Danger thought as he noticed that it was none other than Aria Blaze who was greeting him. Aria was looking worried over him as Danger descended into a dimensional thought of him and Oscura battling on the streets of Paradise City. “Er... Danger?” Aria spoke as she tried to bring him back to the ground.

She understood what he said and turned to other two Dazzlings: Adagio and Sonata. “Do you mind?! I’m trying to have a conversation with Danger here right now!” Aria demanded as Sonata was giggling about something, probably to the fact that Danger gave a facial expression when he dove into his fantasy. Meanwhile, Adagio hoofpalmed by Sonata’s recent actvity and got so mad, so mad, in fact, she got into her LM Classic and drove off. Sonata realised this and got into GT Concept in mid-laughter and chased after her.

Hmmm... Interesting....

I think I'll use this...

Comment posted by Akula966 deleted Feb 28th, 2020

Possibly, Akula. But I would have given her a Krieger 616.

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Okay, then this story is non-canon to mine.

All of this is just confusing enough to keep me interested but still making me slack jawed to the point of wtf.

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I know, I get that feeling when I read Perfect Shift for the first time

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In theory, far from it.

Was not expecting Sunset Shimmer, but still, a good chapter.

Thanks.
As this side of the story comes to a close, I thought I'd do a sequel in the future.

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I've haven't published it yet, it will need some work on it.

I prefer having Sunset Shimmer driving a Hunter Hotspur but the Phoenix works perfectly fine.

This story was heavily inspired by Akula966's Burnout Equestrian Paradise story, I recommend you read all of the current chapters, especially chapter 9!

In that case, could you please link to that story?

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Thanks, now you should put that link in the story's synopsis. Unfortunately, I don't really know how to do that... Please respond to this comment.

What happened in chapter nine of Akula966's Burnout Equestrian Paradise story?

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