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"If you're going faster than the speed of sound, keep going faster." - DangerDean, 2022



This story is a sequel to The Battle of Paradise City - A Burnout Paradise Story

As night falls in Paradise City, an evil will show it's true form.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 23 )

I ended the chapter on a cliff-hanger just to excite the atmosphere,

Oh, boy! Oh, boy! Oh, boy! :pinkiehappy:

Are you planning on featuring the rest of the anti-Mane 6?

“That would be the Krieger Überschall 8.” Danger responded.

It is the Clear-View!

Remember, don't get the Legion of Speedfreaks confused with the Legion of Doom.

I can't. I'm in love with one of the members of the Legion, and I know the others well.

“That would be the Krieger Überschall 8 Clear-View. ” Danger responded.

Dude, get rid of the 8. It isn't in the vehicle's name.

Meanwhile, Oscura was making some final changes to her massive legion. The legionnares wearing a helmet with only one red star on were standing next to Carson GT Knighthawks. The legionnares with two red stars on their helmets were standing next towards their Carson Thunder Shadows. The elites however, who were beside Nakamura Rai-Jin Turbos, have helmets with three red stars and a red dragon symbolism.

There's no K in Nighthawk.

Also, Oscura's speech to her Legion reminds me of General Hux's speech in Star Wars VII: The Force Awakes for some reason, that he gives before the Starkiller Base destroys the New Republic.

If I do a Star Wars theme story, Oscura would be a Sith Lord

Interesting, but I've got my eyes on you, Sombra.

How come no one's commented on my latest chapter yet?

I saw that you added the BSRU to the mix, but did you, by chance, get that from Top Gear?

That idea did cross my mind

Completely forgot my story existed until now, won't lie.

I don't know why my story haven't been getting any comments as of late.

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