The Battle of Paradise City 2 - Destruction at Nightfall

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DangerDean · 23k words · 206 views

The Battle of Paradise City 2 - Destruction at Nightfall

This story is a sequel to The Battle of Paradise City - A Burnout Paradise Story

As night falls in Paradise City, an evil will show it's true form.

Chapters (8)

Chapter 1 - A New Threat · 4th Apr 2020 · 1,123 words
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Chapter 2 - Blazey's Story · 5th Apr 2020 · 1,024 words
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Chapter 3 - Massing an Army of Eternal Darkness · 10th Apr 2020 · 1,016 words
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Chapter 4 - The Calm Before the Storm · 26th Apr 2020 · 1,147 words
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Chapter 5 - Recon Rescue · 22nd May 2020 · 2,031 words
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Chapter 6 - LIghtning · 28th Jun 2020 · 1,628 words
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Chapter 7 - The Plan · 18th Jul 2020 · 1,613 words
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Chapter 8 - The Battle · 31st Jul 2020 · 3,235 words
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DangerDean

DangerDean #1 · Apr 4th, 2020 · · · Chapter 1 - A New Threat ·

I ended the chapter on a cliff-hanger just to excite the atmosphere,

Akula966

Akula966 #2 · Apr 4th, 2020 · · · Chapter 1 - A New Threat ·

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Oh, boy! Oh, boy! Oh, boy!

Akula966

Akula966 #3 · Apr 5th, 2020 · · · Chapter 1 - A New Threat ·

Are you planning on featuring the rest of the anti-Mane 6?

DangerDean

DangerDean #4 · Apr 5th, 2020 · · · Chapter 1 - A New Threat ·

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Hopefully.

Akula966

Akula966 #5 · Apr 5th, 2020 · · · Chapter 1 - A New Threat ·

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Akula966

Akula966 #6 · Apr 6th, 2020 · · · Chapter 2 - Blazey's Story ·

“That would be the Krieger Überschall 8.” Danger responded.

It is the Clear-View!

DangerDean

DangerDean #7 · Apr 6th, 2020 · · · Chapter 2 - Blazey's Story ·

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Oops. Forgot about that.

DangerDean

DangerDean #8 · Apr 6th, 2020 · · · Chapter 2 - Blazey's Story ·

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Fixed.

DangerDean

DangerDean #9 · Apr 6th, 2020 · · · Chapter 2 - Blazey's Story ·

Remember, don't get the Legion of Speedfreaks confused with the Legion of Doom.

Akula966

Akula966 #10 · Apr 6th, 2020 · · · Chapter 2 - Blazey's Story ·

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I can't. I'm in love with one of the members of the Legion, and I know the others well.

Akula966

Akula966 #11 · Apr 6th, 2020 · · · Chapter 2 - Blazey's Story ·

“That would be the Krieger Überschall 8 Clear-View. ” Danger responded.

Dude, get rid of the 8. It isn't in the vehicle's name.

DangerDean

DangerDean #12 · Apr 6th, 2020 · · · Chapter 2 - Blazey's Story ·

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Fixed

Akula966

Akula966 #13 · Apr 10th, 2020 · · · Chapter 3 - Massing an Army of Eternal Darkness ·

Meanwhile, Oscura was making some final changes to her massive legion. The legionnares wearing a helmet with only one red star on were standing next to Carson GT Knighthawks. The legionnares with two red stars on their helmets were standing next towards their Carson Thunder Shadows. The elites however, who were beside Nakamura Rai-Jin Turbos, have helmets with three red stars and a red dragon symbolism.

There's no K in Nighthawk.

DangerDean

DangerDean #14 · Apr 10th, 2020 · · · Chapter 3 - Massing an Army of Eternal Darkness ·

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That's fixed

Akula966

Akula966 #15 · Apr 10th, 2020 · 1 · · Chapter 3 - Massing an Army of Eternal Darkness ·

Also, Oscura's speech to her Legion reminds me of General Hux's speech in Star Wars VII: The Force Awakes for some reason, that he gives before the Starkiller Base destroys the New Republic.