Twilight Gets a Puppy
Season 4
By TDR
Filli-mahi
Prologue
[Ponyville, Fluttershy's cottage three days after Maud's visit.]
Rahs Sparkle was annoyed.
Pinkie Pie was annoyed.
The targets in this instance were Rarity, Twilight, Rainbow Dash, and Applejack.
The group had come across Fluttershy singing on their way to pick her up for lunch. They had then gone nuts over it, forcing the little yellow mare to draw into herself more and more. Rarity cranked it up a notch further by trying to get Fluttershy to join her Ponytones group, you could see the yellow mare start to pull into her self like she was trying to vanish.
Rahs glanced to Pinkie Pie.
Pinkie Pie glanced to Rahs.
Rahs moved between Twilight and Rainbow Dash.
Pinkie moved between Applejack and Rarity.
There was a loud whump sound as two hooves and two paws Gib smacked four ponies in the back of the head at the same time.
“No. Bad. Fluttershy does not want to sing on stage.” Pinkie Pie stated flatly.” Do you remember what we had to do to get her to go on stage for the Hearths Warming play?
“But....” Rarity protested.
Whump.
“Ow!” Rarity whined.
“No.” Pinkie snapped.
[ The next day, the pet center fund raiser. ]
Rahs was annoyed.
Two members of the Ponytones were annoyed.
Rarity was freaking out.
Twilight was oddly calm.
Big Mac seemed rather proud of himself.
“I cannot believe that you managed to throw out your voice.... with a turkey call.” the mare of the Ponytones stated. flatly.
“How could you let him do this!?” Rarity shouted in a panic at Twilight.
“I'm dating him Rarity, I don't own him.” Twilight sighed. ”Besides from my understanding he competes every year and well, that was a … interesting event to say the least. And he did win first place.”
“But the Ponytones need their base tone....” Rarity whined.
“I have that covered.” Twilight smiled.
Rahs glared.
“Don't give me that look, Fluttershy is counting on this group performing to draw in ponies to adopt the animals in need of homes. “ Twilight stated her voice taking on a tone of what could best be described as 'malicious sweetness'.“ And you don't want to disappoint Fluttershy, do you?”
Rahs glared harder.
“What on earth are you two talking about?” Rarity frowned.
Twilight grinned and held up a vial of a blue liquid in her magic. There wasn't much left of it from her experiments, but there was enough.
“Woof.” Rahs growled.
“Awww you know you love me.” Twilight laughed.
Ah yes, the returned of rahs the pone! Indeed!
Time for Shy Hay, Right?
Yay! I see I am not the only one who knows what a Gibbs slap is!
Good old Gibbs slap. Nothing like a bit of percussive maintenance to recalibrate the synapses.
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il go get the peperspray barriers and foarm bats your in charve kf fkndkng security brave enough to hold back the mares of ponyville
I assume Twilight has (or will) warn Shining that she's going to be using Poison Joke this time around?
Also makes me wonder how good Sombra is at singing.
Not good, Twilight. Didn't you know Rahs can cause many ponies to faint just by the sound of his voice?
... and did you warn your older brother this time?
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well, apparently hes actually fairly good, there was a Heartsong incident when Rarity went to Manehattan and Sombra got caught by it as he came along with her...
So they are about to use poison joke, this will be the first time since Twilight became an alicorn. I wonder how that will affect her dragon form. Shining better hope Cadence and Chrysalis aren't together unless he wants Chrysalis and Cadence to team up to try to get him to enjoy Cadence's special spell. Is it bad that I hope that they are successful, and that Gleaming Shield is the one who ends up pregnant with Flurry Heart. Especially since Cadence already got Chrysalis pregnant with Saturnia, and I'd like to see it repeated. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Applying the Rule of Funny, I’d guess… no.
At the end of this a lot of mares would be wet to fill a lake
Did we ever actually get a description of Rah's voice? I'm guessing not considering.
I'm mostly just curious who'd be singing.
Perfection
How DID they even manage that?
To be fair, she deserved that.
So instead of Flutterguy singing it's gonna be Rahstallion. As if he didn't have enough random mares swooning after him (not to mention the ones who actually have a chance).
Flurry Heart inbound, with a DIFFERENT mother this time around.
ehehhehe me think they going to be flood of more ponys to seee rah sing,
I'll admit, I can't tell if she's gonna give it to Flutters or Rahs.
Oh dear...
I know exactly who is getting the potion.
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I tend to lean towards David Bowie voice with the accent, crossed with a bit of Alan Rickman.
This is not gonna end well
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...That is a dangerous combination
"you are not gibs, do that again and I will slap you" Anthony denoso to ziva daved NCIS
you sir won brownie points~
This is another it makes perfect sense in context of this story, but is just different enough to hit uncanny valley while also missing out on what the show did with this and why it works, plus the growth that results.
There was nothing wrong with the rest encouraging Fluttershy to sing more, Fluttershy's whole arc is about her friends slowly helping her push further outside her comfort zone, this was another case of that. Though yeah, Pinkie took that waaaaaay too far, but was still trying to help in her demented way
Now, she misses out on that growth.... buuuut, we get Pony Rhas shenanigans instead so... yeah this gonna be good.
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Fluttershy in this story doesn't suffer from nearly as much social anxiety to begin with, so there's not nearly as much that needs fixing.
Chrysalis Poisen Joke honey would be better
Woof - Hot Poisen Rahs incoming
Clever, Rahs don't want to burden Fluttershy and Twilight wants to get back on Rahs for her name...
Gibs: shut it Denoso...
Did Fluttershy get payed well for being a element if harmony before?