Twilight Gets a Puppy, Season 4

by TDR

Indonesian damsel manifestation, part 3

Twilight Gets a Puppy
Season 4
By TDR

Indonesian damsel manifestation,
part 3

[Crystal Empire]

“How did you even get arrested?” Twilight fussed.

“Tha better question is, how did you manage to leave me in there all night?” Applejack growled her ears flat to her head.

“Sorry, I got back from hanging out with Moon Dancer late and the girls were already asleep as were Spike and Firefly. I thought you went out for some air or something and I went to bed pretty quick.” Twilight protested.

“Well, at least that crap is over.” Applejack grumbled.

“Sorta.” Twilight frowned.

“What do yah mean sorta?” Applejack questioned turning to narrow her eyes at Twilight.

“Weeeeeell, turns out my word doesn't carry as much weight as my brothers due to no one seeing me beat Sombra, or really do anything but blow up the top of the palace. I'm still considered a hero but... well. Spike and Shining have the most popularity. Heck even Rahs has gotten more popular here as a 'heroic moon dog.' “Twilight offered. “I'm not even sure where Shining is right now. If I could find him I could get a full on royal pardon.”

[At the con]

“Oooooh, look at that , and that, and that, and that, and that.......” Shining Armor cheered, bouncing around the room looking at all the gaming exhibits.

The Emperor of the Crystal Empire had on a costume to help hide him, though he got a number of stares due to the detail he put into the mind flayer costume he wore.

Cadence had opted to simply dress as the princess from that one turtle stomping game on the Neightendo. Clearly she had taste with her pink design, thus far she hadn't been recognized or paid much attention to. Seems not every one was a fan of her however.

“And I married him.” Cadence sighed, before she glanced to Chrysalis.

The Changeling Queen was in the form of a cream furred tall blonde maned mare in a skin tight blue suit with some red design on the back. She was currently striking a number of sexy poses to the fan colts with cameras around her, feeding on the lust for that zero tux thingy she was dressed as or whatever. Cadence did have to admit she looked good though.

Cadence sighed regardless. “ Nerds.... both of them.....”

“I managed to get you out, but it's a pretty safe bet you're going to be followed all day. And if you transform again they might just lock you up again.”Twilight explained

“Really?”Applejack questioned with a glare.

“Fraid so.” Twilight sighed with a shrug.

“Right. Ah'm headed back to the hotel, yer on crusader duty then.” Applejack huffed.

“What, wait I had other stuff to do...”Twilight protested as Applejack trotted off whipping her tail.

“Twilight, ah've been here three times since ah had this curse and each time yah told me yah were gonna talk to yer brother about letting everyone know ah was good, and there wasn't any reason to panic. And yet here it is mai fourth time here and, AH SPENT THA NIGHT IN JAIL!” Applejack snapped. “Yah clearly ain't done it, and ah ain't gonna risk going back again fer something not my fault. Ah'm going to that hotel, yer on Crusader duty. They didn't burn anything down yesterday being alone, so today's got a higher chance. Better git going afore tha fire starts.”

Twilight flinched and looked back at the currently unexploded convention hall, then to the mare walking off with three, not so subtle, guards following her.

“Well crap.” Twilight sighed.

[Ponyville mid afternoon.]

Rahs Sparkle yawned as he closed the library door behind him. The sign was flipped to closed, the wards set, the pets informed exactly what might happen if they made a mess, and off he went.

Padding through Ponyville towards the train station he stifled a small yawn. He didn't think he slept well at all due to his nerves. How did any one get by on only 12 hours sleep any way, the only pony in this town that came close was Rainbow Dash.

Speaking of Dash.

“WAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!!!” The cyan mare screamed before plowing into the roof of a house.

Yeah, that was about right. Something felt off about the town today however. The shouting was a clue, though by the same token not really, this was Ponyville after all. Though it was a Monday not a Tuesday. Something smelled really good to, though he hesitated to seek the source as he had to meet Jynx for dinner.

“Rahs Darling, there you are!” Rarity called making Rahs groan a little.”Oh lovely you're wearing that ensable I set up for you, perfect. I take you are on your way out to your date, hmmm?”

“Woof.” Rahs said flatly trying not to get drawn into a conversation, his train to Canterlot was leaving shortly.

“Wonderful.” Rarity stated before starting to offer advice and suggestions.

Rahs rolled his eyes as he headed towards the station. Was the north side of town always this gaudy? Gold and gems seemed every where. Did he miss a holiday that needed this sort of decoration? Ehh whatever.

“... now I do hope you have the address and the time, it took a good bit of effort on my part getting this set up, Canterlot is still rather problematic about diamond dogs.. well I'm sure you know that...”

Was that a crystal tree? When did that get planted, evidently recently due to how the birds seemed to be freaking out over it.

“... but any way darling, please do keep in mind that while I have done my best, Jynx is from a differing culture and she is trying very hard regardless. So do try to be tolerant.” Rarity continued.

Rahs sniffed the air, his ears perking.

“Bark?”

“What? Oh why thank you, I did try a new perfume, my last one simply didn't have the … glamour and impact that I wished. So I changed it.” Rarity offered with a slight if menacing chuckle. “But any way darling do keep in mind what I said and try and enjoy yourself, feel free to give me all the juicy details later as well, ta ta.”

Rahs blinked looking back at her as he caught the flare of magic. He had a brief glimpse of a dark form before it vanished in a flash of teleportation.

When did Rarity learn to teleport? Wait was that town hall? Why was it crystal? Why were all the trees sapphire and gold... was that a garden party in front of Sugar Cube Corner, what?

Rahs blinked turning to take a step back into town and figure out what was going on when the train whistle blew behind him.

“All aboard!” The conductor yelled.

He paused glancing at the town then at the train and after a moment of thought he shrugged and turned to board the train. Whatever this was would keep until either he or Twilight got back. He had a date to get to, and it wouldn't be fair if he was on time to the others but not this one.

Comments

[goranxii]

Bad time to leave town Rahs.

[BradtheBrony]

Heh, glad to see Jnyx doesn't need to go beatdown a Nightmarity for setting back her date!

Though now I am slightly upset there's not some Rahs/Sombra team-up shenanigans to take down the Nightmarity. Oh well, fun is still fun!

[Booster Spice]

Run Rahs, Run.

Theres going to be, Doilies.

[CrovaxII]

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What are you talking about? This is the perfect time to leave town.

[goranxii]

10327657
No it's not, because Twilight is going to scream at him later over doing so.

[Hiroblade]

“Bark?”

“What? Oh why thank you, I did try a new perfume, my last one simply didn't have the … glamour and impact that I wished. So I changed it.” Rarity offered with a slight if menacing chuckle. “But any way darling do keep in mind what I said and try and enjoy yourself, feel free to give me all the juicy details later as well, ta ta.”

This is a MASSIVE red flag. Rarity never understood Rahs and now she can.

[theillustriousq]

Perfect time to leave town Rahs.

[redsopine]

10327699
she would scream at him anyway for leaving the library alone with the pets

[redsopine]

10327738
true though he has a date to keep/why would he make the bitch that can beat him up easily mad at him besides the whole she looks hot mad angle (having a guess lol also not swearing using the correct term for female dogs for jynx)

[Jaycren]

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But that's future Rahs' problem. Besides Two needs to learn to stop imposing on her brothers. This date was set up weeks in advance. With a ruler from a previously hostile race, that lives underneath all their feet. He really can't skip out on this.

[Greenhorn]

Something smelled really good to, though he hesitated to seek the source as he had to meet Jynx for dinner.

Uh-oh, a bad news for Cadance.

[Misplaced Mage]

10327635 10327657 10327699
This sort of disaster in the making has several major ways to provide drama:

1. ”The avalanche has already started. It is too late for the pebbles to vote,” or, “Hang on, lady — we going for a ride!” The disaster is of such magnitude that the protagonist can only attempt to mitigate it, at best: to survive it, at worst. Foreknowledge of the disaster usually has little effect on the outcome as the chain of events is already in motion and cannot be interrupted.
2. ”The fate of the planet is in the hands of a bunch of retards I wouldn't trust with a potato gun,” or, “If Virgil needs more blood, it will be my blood.” Same as #1, but there’s a clock counting down, somewhere. The disaster can be averted, but interrupting the chain of events usually can only be done at the last instant, with an event that would otherwise be considered a disaster on its own, and often requires a major or ultimate sacrifice on the part of the protagonist.
3. “Three hundred and fifty Gs!” or, ”Big things have small beginnings,” or, ”All for the want of a nail!” The chain of events begins innocuously enough, but is overlooked, ignored, or was deliberately initiated with another goal in mind. Each event in the chain is of greater magnitude than the last, and most of the drama or comedy lies in observing the growing chaos.

As Rahs is a magic-eater and the God of Drama The Theater, it’s the perfect time for him to leave town as it provides the most drama per case #2 or case #3, and agrees with the Rule of Funny.

[TDR]

10327879
keep in mind . Nightmares are delicious

[TDR]

10327888
God of Theater, not just Drama, There's comedy too

[Misplaced Mage]

10327896
I stand corrected. “Tragedy tomorrow, comedy tonight!”

[Greenhorn]

10327893
I keep forgetting he is a God of (food) Dream.

[ChaosDX1]

When the Sparkles say they're going to do something, you'll probably want to get that in writing.

[Barry the Brony]

I think what I love best here is that even though she is clearly corrupted by dark magic, Rarity is still...well Rarity

[Tangent]

You know, I could see Applejack returning to Ponyville as a pony, only to immediately transform into a Witchwolf the moment she steps off the train due to all of Rarity's "beautification enhancements."

[Misplaced Mage]

10327893
One could almost say that they’re… magically delicious!

[Asolem2]

Cadence sighed regardless. “ Nerds.... both of them.....”

And you hooked up with them both

Rahs rolled his eyes as he headed towards the station. Was the north side of town always this gaudy? Gold and gems seemed every where. Did he miss a holiday that needed this sort of decoration? Ehh whatever.

He completely missed that she understood him

[Arkonfleight]

10327893
>not 'magically delicious'
You had one job.

[Neece]

It says a lot about the Sparkles that a Nightmare Rarity barely even blips on his weird-o-meter.

[theillustriousq]

I wouldn't be surprised at all if the next chapter started with something like this:

Celestia,

Celestia: "At least he's using my name now. That's a massive improvement over what he was calling me when he first arrived."

This is not my fault. I do not know what happen, though I suspect it might have something to do with your old castle and any tomes you might have left there.

Celestia: "Now why did he put that preamble in there."

All of Ponyville has been turned into crystal.

Celestia: "That explains it."

My warden has somehow transformed herself into a tall, black, sexy mare who bares more than a striking resemblance to Nightmare Moon.

Celestia: "Twilight would never do that."

And she is currently using me as a ponykin for her latest fashion designs.

Celestia: "But Rarity would."

Send help.

[Gizmo Gear]

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Wheeeeeze!

[DeathKing]

So is the book how Soloman mange to corrupted Luna?

[TDR]

10329123
No. Keep in mind this is A night mare not THE Nightmare

[Greenhorn]

10328188
I wonder who would get a taste of her first, Applejack or Rahs?

[Seraphem]

Cadence sighed regardless. “ Nerds.... both of them.....”

And it is awesome.

CMC rule 7: The longer it's been since the last fire and/or explosion, the larger the next one will be. So get to it Twi you have only yourself to blame.

I love how life is just so damn bizzare for them, this us just filed under "meh, I'll deal with it later if someone else doesn't "

[Black--Soul]

Fair logic from Rahs. I guess things will be very escalated when everyones back...

[Black--Soul]

Poor Applejack... Twilight really screwed that one up...

[Thor447]

“Well crap.” Twilight sighed.

https://youtu.be/JWP9N3C46YU

[Black--Soul]

CMC earn their reputation in the Empire as well or?

[Black--Soul]

I wonder what great games they bring with them.
Spike and Shining Armor sure had a blast.