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Alter Sol
The soul is driven by experience and experience is the drive of life.
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Really? When and where?
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Mobile Fighter G Gundam with the Shuffle Alliance and Gundam Build Fighters to some limit. Gundam Build Divers does a little of the same though less and the original gundam story does the same with NewTypes in general, even though their abilities are more mentally based.
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I honestly did not intend for there to be Undertale inspiration, though your opinion of such is warranted given the context.
I’m sorry I can’t keep up with the story it seems to jump around no consistency it’s like there’s a second story that tells the rest of the details I’m looking for
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I'm more trying to make the condition of the characters realistic without adding every single detail and making it drag on. The perspective changes to fill in gaps though I could do that more reasonably without giving people a headache. At the same time I don't want to just hang up the fiction here cause that's lazy. I'll try my best to reign in my shit but I'm not going to promise anything.
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Thank you for being honest.i will keep reading for now to see if it get better.
I don’t know these people that you’re talking about long enough to actually care do not mention their freaking names it is a waste of time and writing!
And when you are going into a new chapter and you change the person that the reader is reading about put POV to this person otherwise it’s very confusing because I had no idea what you were talking about I was going what the fuck is this he was a male why is it talking about a she being princess and shit now!
Confusing as all hell, not even a hint of world building, no intro, terrible pacing, NOTHING to tie us to the characters. This fanfic is crap.
Wait, so it goes from a guy finding his reborn wife, being finally happy after tens of millenia, then because some random incubus (male succubus) has feelings for the guy and vice versa, the main characters WIFE essentially kills herself so said incubus can be with HER husband...... what kind of bullshit is this? Yeah no, I'm done reading this. Interesting idea to begin with, but that is just retarded.
What the fuck was alexie for this whole time?! All that love and passion these last few chapters It was fucking cute BUT no, you wanted to make the main character gay.
This sucked, It made no sense, too many plot holes And some random incubus just wanted the main character for himself. We don't even know anything about him for fuck sake!! From what I got and felt is that he was just some random ex. Sorry Man, but don't do something like this in the future. If you want to finish the story finish it I get you probably didn't want to be lazy but don't make plot holes.