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Alter Sol
The soul is driven by experience and experience is the drive of life.
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What kind of anime is Code Vein?
A tad cringe in places and the pace is going a bit too fast along with a few grammatical errors. You should slow down a bit and flesh things out more and be sure to check your grammar. Other then that your story seems rather interesting.
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Code Vein is actually a game. I wanted to do something a bit different this time around.
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This was actually my first attempt at a short story. I've seen longer and just wanted to get this out of my head. Never could write 15K words in one sitting and got burned out with this after a while but I'm happy for the input since I do still have a pacing issue. Thank you again.