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I don’t know these people that you’re talking about long enough to actually care do not mention their freaking names it is a waste of time and writing!
And when you are going into a new chapter and you change the person that the reader is reading about put POV to this person otherwise it’s very confusing because I had no idea what you were talking about I was going what the fuck is this he was a male why is it talking about a she being princess and shit now!
Confusing as all hell, not even a hint of world building, no intro, terrible pacing, NOTHING to tie us to the characters. This fanfic is crap.