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kits


All my things are horse things!

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Hilarious! Simply hilarious! :rainbowlaugh:

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Glad you enjoyed it.

this is a good epilogue to an epilogue :V

I, initially, put it my 'Read Later', but considering what this was a sequel to, I couldn't wait.

This was kinda funny, and really cute in a way. Cool work!

Time is an illusion.

Thank you for this short story :twilightsmile:

Oh no,
now I have to re-read the first story again so I know what happens :yay:

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Spoilers: Pinkie makes some baked goods.

Twidash forever!!!! Thanks for this, kits!

You have managed to attract my attention, now you deal with the resulting nagging!

bearing the pair to the floor

wrong word.

Twilight smiled as she homed in on source of the panting

word missing

Dash snickered, rubbing her head with one hoof as even as she kissed Twilight. "Maybe we should get a light, unless you've actually figure out how to make me glow in the dark."

Mane and Tail and technically coat and hooves should work just fine.
For most intents and purposes those are as dead as it gets. Even teeth stupidly have nerves in them and bone has marrow, nails and hair are ceratin and have no such compunctions.

she stood and walked past the Rainbow's shadowy form

petty sure at least the ' is incorrect, probably the the as well.

She crashed into mattress and bounced

word missing again

Her tail started to flick and twitch and her mouth was suddenly dried.

dried? really? you sure about that one?

Having not read the first story, this was really cute and it was fun seeing them stubbornly stumble around in the dark.

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The good news is, the only things you need to know from the first story are that Twilight and Rainbow kiss.

It’s a shocker coming from me, I know. But that is what happens :3

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