Twilight is different, that's for sure. Only, she didn't know how different she was until that fateful Wedding. With new revelations, her entire existence is put into question.
Although, it's not until some-pony else tells Twilight the truth does everything starts to slowly unravel and fall into place. With her unknown past looming and secrets between even her closest friends, Twilight Sparkle's life is turned upside down as she struggles with her identity and with the rising threat in the Badlands as well as the threats between those closest to her.
Will Twilight ever know who she really is?
Cover art by myself.
Chapters (31)
A very cool start I hope to read more whenever you give
This chapter has me so confused that I don't even know where to start with trying to fix it.
Well then consider some of my confusion to be quieted right now, I wonder where this will go.
Damn that’s harsh but I guess it’s for the greater to save the rest of Equestria (unless they’re not in Equestria at the time)
I was able to follow the story no prob, but wow,...that ending.
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Is it too fast? It's relevant to the plot. I'm sorry if it's confusing.
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Not saying. Spoilers.
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It's not so much how fast things are going (although that doesn't help), but more that the story so far nor the description have indicated this kind of tone. Simply put, the story goes from 0 to 9000 without any warning.
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I'll take that into consideration. I'm not that great at slow-paced stories. I've only just begun to slow my plot down and I'm working on it. I'll slow it all down in future chapters.
Thanks for your feedback by the way.
Okay, how did AJ end up with the Apple family. The rest is believable but odd that half the elements are changelings.
Too bad this might be dead.
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Don't worry. I'm planning on coming back to it, eventually.
so... was everyone harmed by the blast? Fluttershy, Applejack and most of the ponies were not described as injured till after the blast. Celestia i could understand (being cocooned) but Fluttershy? why was Rainbow and Applejack hit? are they changelings? if so why are they injured? Twilight seems fine, in fact the final lines imply the anti changeling blast was healthy for changelings (assuming Twilight is the changeling) but more damaging for the ponies...
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They were all bubbled in Twilight's shield, the others got hit when Twilight, Dash and AJ got tossed around. And I would say that the others are just a bit shell-shocked.
It'll be explained a bit more in the next chapter, which I'm uploading in a few minutes.
Okay,how did Chryssy know?
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Spoilers.
Definitely following this story now.
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That's great to hear.
lol
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Lol indeed
it liiives!!! yay!! looking forward to more!
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Thanks.
This is definitely going to get interesting.
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That’s one thing I can assure you of.
Thanks for the many interesting updates.
Chrysalis, I don't think you have the right to call her a traitor.
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That's true.
Gotta hand it to ya. I don't know why i've only picked this up now, even when I saw it like a year ago during those initial updates. This is really nicely written, decent pacing and overall a nice read. Definitely gonna put this in my main folder. Looking forward to more updates.
Seriously, this is a very fresh take on Changeling Twilight, I fell in love with Change, and I certainly am falling in love with this, keep it up!
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Thank you very much. A year ago it was a bit of a shaky mess but I've since cleaned it up.
I definitely appreciate that fact that you left a comment.
Umm OK then.
You want "thou" here instead of "thee"; thou is to thee as I is to me (subjective vs. objective). Also, the first "thy" is fine (possessive), but the second should be "thou art" (or "thou'rt", "you are/you're").
"Thine" is used instead of "thy" when the following word begins with a vowel. "Thee" should be "thou", again.
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Thank you. When I wrote Luna's lines, my research was a bit hasty.
Guessing you meant "nobles" here?
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Oh yeah. Whoops. That skipped over my editing it seems. Thank you for pointing that out.
Woo! Two chapters in one day! Keep up the good work, I look forward to more!
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There should be some more in a few days if you keep an eye out.
Well that is a twist change
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I hope you enjoyed it at least. Twist or no twist.
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curious to where it goes before saying anything
My Money is on Shining, seeing as he is the only one close to her who doesn't know the truth yet that I can think of.
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nay, but one might cozy up to her in an attempt to discover the warm glow of her power and how it might be acquired. surly, they would have to build up great trust for such a plan to work...
okay before I go any further you have to correct that start. if Luna can stop the sun from rising then she can move it so the WHOLE premise of the sun and moon not working is bunk for this universe since Luna is free.
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I fixed it. I do believe I worded it incorrectly. Luna can raise the sun but Celestia, due to be indisposed, is somehow blocking her from doing so. She thinks it's part of some elaborate joke.
Nice little chapter
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Agreed!
<sigh> i really dislike it when Twiling stories take this route, it never ends well and always seems more that a little shoehorned...
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What do you mean by that? I'd really like to know what you're personally displeased about with my story.
Twilight looks blind in the cover art. You should fix that.
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Oh yes, I'm aware.
I've been meaning to redraw the cover art again for a while but I currently can't due to technical issues with my device.
I thank and admire your concern.