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Lucy_Marigold


A simple fanfic writer. Creating for the enjoyment of others and for the enjoyment of being creative.

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Long ago in a town that sat near a forest. At that time, Celestia was unable to tame the horrors and dangers of the night. When darkness fell upon the town, something devious happened as others lurked around. There was only 15 remaining adults yet they only have days left. Who will survive in the town called Salem?


(Cover art drawn by myself.)

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 9 )

I like what you've got, but it does need to be fleshed out a bit more. Other than that, it is pretty good! :twilightsmile:

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There's another chapter. And I'm doing pretty well without an editor so far.

Is this a closed rolelist (All Any)? But overall, it has a pretty nice plot.

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No actually I have set roles for all of em. But rather than a jester and exe there's a WW and Arso.

Sick. Looking for forward to Day 3.

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Eh.. good luck there's a lot of crying... A LOT OF CRYING. Reminder each character already has opinions of the others and their own stories.

Ok, I like where this is going.

But my god it feels kinda odd. I wish you would use each role to the max. Hopefully next chapter does this.

Other then that, really good.

This good

“I got it here,” Vine Flower said, tears still streaming down her face. “This burning feeling you feel? It is shame. T-That’s all it says.” bruh was that a tf2 reference I think the voiceline is from the Heavy weapon guy

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