Twilight has a dark secret: she isn't satisfied with her current lot in life. Yes, she does have amazing friends that have stood by her through thick and thin, yes, she does have a supportive and kind family, and she is the student of Princess Celestia herself. But she can't shake off the feeling that she is missing out on life.
How many other sights are there to be seen, how many ponies are there to meet, how many challenges will she never face by being in Ponyville, by being Twilight Sparkle?
One day she has finally had enough and fueled by a several months long rut and scientific curiosity she decides to go through with the most insane plan imaginable in order to put her doubts to rest.
The background of the cover picture is not made by me.
Oh please, please, please let this be the worst in terms of graphical gore and violence this story has and the and let there an interesting adventure that will unfold.
I like it! I'm very interested to see where this goes!
Interesting... Your hooks have grabbed me, and now I wait to see were they will drag me to
I believe I shall tag along for this little adventure.
I found it very mind-boggling for Twilight to abandon her life this way. Placing your memories in someone's head to act like your body double is thought-provoking to say the least. Great job. I'll be looking forward to reading about Twilight's endeavours, including the fake one.
Also, if the gore tag is somehow related to changeling loosing control and slowly becoming what it originaly was, I am sold.
Fantasic!
It's always great to see a story that hasn't updated in a while pop up. I'm very much interested in this story. I really hope you see it through!
Oof... Already on the verge of insanity.
I TURNED MYSELF INTO A CHANGELING SPIKE! A CHANGEIING, I'M 'LING SPARKLE!
Amazing chapter
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I'm glad that you liked the chapter.
Is this an anthology?
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Don't you hate it when your comments don't get a response?
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No, it's a continuous story.
We passed upon the stair
We spoke of was and when
Although I wasn't there
She said I was her friend
Which came as a surprise
I spoke into her eyes
I thought you died alone
A long long time ago
Oh no, not me
We never lost control
You're face to face
With the mare who sold the world
I laughed and shook hand
And made my way back home
I searched for form and land
For years and years I roamed
I gazed a gazeless stare
We walked a million hills
I must have died alone
A long, long time ago
Who knows?
Not me
I never lost control
You're face to face
With the mare who sold the world
Holy wow this is good.
I'm not quite sure where I expected this to go, but this certainly wasn't it, and I'm so in love with it.
Definitely looking forward to more of this!
So much could go wrong from the beginning... Twi is off the deep end
At first I thought, 'oh, Twilight does a messed up experiment to go live a new life, might be cool' and then the thing with Zecora happened.
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Twilight will still get to live a whole host of different lives, that hasn't changed.
I don't mean to nitpick the chapter, but I found three small issues that should be fixed.
Her name is spell with one "o," not two: "Daring Do" (This mistake occurred at least three times.)
That should be "borrowed"
As these are both titles of holidays or events, certain parts of their names should start with capital letters: "Hearth's Warming, Winter Wrap Up"
Aside from that, this was another good chapter.
This is honestly not what I expected to happen. I was imagining alternate dimensions and stuff
Just read through this, its really good! Fun exploration of the magoc, specifically changeling magic, and Twilight is wonderfully consistant. Looking forward to reading more.
I'm loving this story and I look forward to seeing where it goes next!
the mention of selling seashells on the seashore reminded me of this video.
Great premise loving it so far