Everypony is nervous about their first date, but for the ever-studious Twilight Sparkle a first date means lots of research. Will her books help her out once more or will living through something be the better teacher?
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Tealove
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This...is...ADORABLE!
I love it love it love it. Favorited!
Keep it up!
Huzzah for crack shippings!
Not gonna lie, that was rather sweet. This was the first time I've read a (light) romance fic which did not employ the usual methods, i.e., ship the Mane Six and see what happens.
Nicely done!
alright, well that was messed up. Ponies having sex? this a kids show, damnit!
Sure, it was kinda cute, but that sex part at the end was WAY uncalled for.
thats all I have to say.
no no. I guess I just didnt get it because clover seemed like a real idiot. why would twilight want to get in his pants?
And I'm so happy...
D'aaaawww...
That was too adorable. I`ve never read such a good romance story. Especially between a mare and stallion. I absolutely loved it
Keep it up!
D`aaaaaaaaaaaw
Tried this once..
It worked...
1055596 There was no sex. Star charts and constellations was not an analogy, that's what they actually were getting into. I don't write clop or anything close to it so you might want to calm down just a tad.
1055271 Whee, thank you!
1055294 I swear it is my mission in life to make it less cracky and more appealing!
1055299 Thank you so much for saying that. I try not to fall into typical scenarios so that's really encouraging.
1055619 Hee!
1055766 Really? Thank you!
1055815 Haha, thanks!
1055881 And that's okay! Thank you!!
1056221
Sorry I meant that in a sincere way. Crack shippings aren't a bad thing at all. Hell, it adds more variety instead of everyone wearing out fluttermac and the like.
1057060 No, I didn't think you did! You've always left me nothing but kind comments before.
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1057340 GIF LOVE! Thanks, sweets.
1057338
I misread your response and thought you took offense, my fault.
Anyway, do you take requests? I think you could write a good Twilight x Cheerilee with your trademak d'awwwness.
1058060 I'm not taking requests at the moment just because I need to get health stuff taken care of and finish a few other projects first. But when I do open up to them again I'll see what I can come up with. ^^
Adorkable beyond all reason.
Aw, this was sweet, I gotta say.
If there's anything I can criticize though, it's that Clover felt a bit too... perfect, the flaws that you mentioned are more "informed" than "shown". He almost felt like a Mary Sue.
1058786 My favorite word for this couple, hands down.
1059953 Good to know. I'll try and work on that for future things. Thank you!
Eeyup
Awww, how sweet ^^
1306648
Thank you, darling.
*reads the part where Twilight blindly goes up to the bedroom*
How could she take advantage of Clover in this vulnerable state. What a ho-
*finishes reading the section*
-rse. What a horse... Good mare.
Another great story 'love. Keep it up!
And then SEX happened :D
I approve.
Cute enough. Clover was amusing. Poor Twilight, she's putty in his hooves. AND taking advantage of his delicate emotional state! For shame.
For a second there, I was afraid it was about to turn into a date-rape. Glad to be wrong XD
Anyway, great fic! =D It's short, sweet, and funny! I wish I was as adorably funny as Clover!
Spike said he was going to sleep int a tree. Since he lives in one doesn't he always sleep in a tree?
That was really cute.
I noticed you named the first chapter "Chapter 1", so are you going to be adding more chapters to this story or is it really complete? I have to admit, I am interested in seeing where things go from here
3649542 Sadly this was just a one-shot. But thank you for liking it enough to wish for more!
This was cute. Take a mustache.
This was cute! I hope you can right more stories like this.
I just hate that I can't right stories this well.
Glad to know there are other Twilight lovers out there! Keep up the good work!
right should be write
sorry I don't english good