A Friend In Heat

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TheKissoftheVoid

TheKissoftheVoid #1 · Apr 11th, 2019 · · ·

I liked it. A pretty good balance of sexy and cute. Nicely done!

TrixterCat

TrixterCat #2 · Apr 11th, 2019 · · ·

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Thank you.

lazyreader19

lazyreader19 #3 · Apr 11th, 2019 · 2 · ·

I agree with the first guy, definitely a good balance. It was very pleasant, and surprisingly wholesome for clop when it came to Dash's pep talk and help.

TrixterCat

TrixterCat #4 · Apr 11th, 2019 · · ·

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Goldminer23

Goldminer23 #5 · Apr 11th, 2019 · · ·

Still excellently written.
Nice job again man.

TrixterCat

TrixterCat #6 · Apr 11th, 2019 · · ·

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Goldminer23

Goldminer23 #7 · Apr 11th, 2019 · · ·

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Isseus

Isseus #8 · Apr 11th, 2019 · 15 · ·

Is it weird that seeing such a cute and vanilla fic that sticks to existing characterisations is a welcome breath of fresh air instead of the norm?

Golden Fang Ryu Shenron

Golden Fang Ryu Shenron #9 · Apr 11th, 2019 · 3 · ·

“Just imagine those strong hooves roaming your body, exploring all the nooks and crannies.” Rainbow punctuated her words by gently brushing her wings against Fluttershy’s back. “I bet he would take his time, reaaally gently going about it, appreciating every. Last. Bit. Of. You.”

I bet Fluttershy would love for Braeburn to do that!!!

Mlpuniverse

Mlpuniverse #10 · Apr 12th, 2019 · · ·

“Good morning,” Rainbow sultry whispered. A pleased groan was the response, followed by a wing that wrapped itself around her barrel.

I think that "rainbow whispered in a sultry tone" would have worked better as it is less choppy and flows better. Feel free to let me know if you ever need help with editing.

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