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Interesting so far. Although I noticed that Twilight has yet sought out Princess Celestia's advice on what is happening to her. The fact that Twilight in essence stumbled onto her sexuality and in a way mated with Spike. Also kind of hard not to know what's going on. They are after all humanized ponies. Unless your not giving them the base instincts and or estrus AKfA Heat which is described as a burning need in the Loins for mares with a desire to be mounted and bred. Even women have that desire but never to the extent that a Pony would feel when in heat. If your going about this story as Twilight going through Alicorn Puberty it could be understanding why she's alittle confused and unsure of herself but she would have already gone through puberty as a unicorn. Even according to the cannon Twilight and the Main Six are all adult mares not teens or preteens like the CMC. Now this is just a guestimate but a mares first estrus cycle or first heat happens around 12-14 give or take for the average pony. We don't know the age's of the Main Six even though there was 3 birthday's mentioned in the show but not there ages Twilight, Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie all had a birthday so far in the canon episodes yet no age was mentioned how old they turned We know at a guess of how old Sweetie belle is due to the episode when Luna visits Sweetie in a dream. So from this knowledge we know that The main six have at least been through a few estrus cycles and or mating heat. Not much is known about Alicorn's though except Celestia and Luna and Cadence who were the only Alicorns until Twi gained wings good story so far Looking forward to reading more and seeing where you go with this.
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Ah, I see. The chapters name seems to have confused you. which is why I changed it. And don't worry. I'm currently writing the chapter where that happens. This is not about actual puberty and i'm only going to say that much. Thank you very much and it will all be explained soon.
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Okay! That's good to know. I hope I didn't come off as rude or anything Like that Yes I was a bit confused about the Original Title of the chapter. Still good but that does bring up a question of how the feelings and sensations Twilight were feeling before um doing the deed the burning in her loins You do not have to say of course, but it almost sounded like Twilight has entered some form of Alicorn Estrus if she hasn't recognized the sensation. Is Twilight in heat and if so is there going to be consequences for the actions taken with Spike and or anypony who happens to get caught up in what Twilight's going through? I know it will be explained as the story goes on so I'm Looking forward to finding out what Twilight's going through and basing what I see of the Title of the story I have a guess. Princess of Friendship with benefits hmmm. Tracking Story and Looking forward to the next chapter.
I think this would end better with a harem of all of Twilight’s friends, the princesses, Spike, and maybe at least three residents from ponyville. Your choice.
Edit: Sorry about deleting my post just to repost it. I just wanted it to mark this chapter.
8291891 That's what I was going for at first. But then I was like, This seems well enough. If enough people wish for it, i'll continue it though.
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Sweet. Looking forward to it. If however, this is the end then nice job.
Oh....My.....
! I can definitely see that this could be a Herd/Harem type story especially if Twilight truly does love her friends. Also there is a bit of headcanon going on too. What I mean about that is, Friendship and Love are relatively the same Lover's or even husbands and wife's start out as friends in a lot of ways or at least as acquaintances that goes beyond friendship. Love is a stronger bond of friendship a closer type of friendship even Friends with benefits can turn into Love if there is spark that can be fanned into a blaze. Cadence is the Princess of Love Twilights the Princess of Friendship there aspects are close and or simular Hell even Celestia has her hooves in Love too. Estrus is activated by the sun in a lot of ways Celestia is a Princess of Fertility. and what was said about her powers is true Luna controls the Tides of Equis and should the need ever arrive could destroy everything with mass tidal waves tsunamis and mass flooding. Celestia could burn everything to a crisp maybe even cause mass volcanic eruptions. Scarry if you think about it. Twilight has to learn how to control her power and not let her powers control her. Twilight could easily fall and become a nightmare. Or worse be the next Sombra with her power she could easily conquer Equestria and from what Celestia said even ending Luna and Herself. Not that she would that would be too much Love the chapter looking forward to seeing how Twilight Luna Celestia and Spike have fun and see how things go from there. Good Job I give you Three Yays and Two Trolestias 
Oh also have a Stash 
I'll let Ron Burgundy express my opinion of this chapter.
It's "getting out of hoof" not "getting out of hand". This is not EQG
8294658 and the mane six are human here. Tags
Let the gathering commence.
TRIGGERED
8301721 I love your profile pic.
So what? Spike was in the room and didn't get in on the action? Sooner or later all her friends have to find out about each other.
Now, only Honesty and Laughter remain. It would be a
if one of them was in love with Spike, instead of Twilight.
Is the spike saying NOOOOOOOO supposed to be a Darth Vader reference???
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Don't know that much about star wars. Nope.
great story. I enjoyed reading it
Bondage-Discipline, Dominance-Submission, Sadism-Masochism. BDSM.
"Feel like a million bucks" should be "Feel like a million bits". Bits is the currency in Equestria and "Bucks" would reference what Applejack does to trees.
And "ever so often" should be "every so often".
I thought it was canon that Spike always woke up before Twilight because Twilight would regularly spend all night reading while Spike went to bed early, and that he always made breakfast.
Also, I am regularly irked by their relationship in this story. Spike viewing himself as just an assistant in the last chaper and in this chapter how he thinks a long time about how she'll punish him. First it seems out of place and second.. "Beat him to a pulp"?
Spike can bathe in lava and eats gemstones. In theory, being a dragon means that his body is comparable to plate armor. We have no reason to even humor the idea that Twilight can physically harm Spike even if she wanted to. This almost feels like you are trying to make Spike have a punishment fetish or something.
Also, it should be made more clear that Twilight was in the nude and why she was ok with being as such in front of Spike. Not to mention how she's suddenly in the room at the doorway when she was just in the shower.
When do we get to see Twilight with Pinkie Pie?? I can hardly wait to see what she does, both in confessing her love and the sex itself. Great story, keep up the great work!
Please tell me, that this amazing story will eventually be continued??
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Not just continued. But ended. The next chapter is the last chapter.
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Have you ever thought of writing a second story based in this universe?
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No actually. A second story did not occur to me. It would be nice though
Nice way to wrap it up. Is there any chance of you writing more adult stories??
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I have several. Some of them you might not enjoy, though I have one I think you might like
And here I thought Rainbow is the only mare who's bisexual? Well at least this is one anthro clop everybody should be satisfied for. But still, how did I miss that TwiSpike moment?
I'm always a sucker for one of my favorites. And then some...
Then again there are some stories that aren't in every group I joined supposedly...
the story is really pleasing me, well written I'm curious if this twilight phase can be a particular effect of its state of alicorno ?. I will follow your story with great interest.
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Feel free to continue reading. The story is finished as of today. I hope you enjoy!
This line works better in the Anthro-verse. Hooves may work better in this universe.
Just saying. Sorry, rechecked the tags, it's fine. Just me when I first wake up, not thinking straight yet.
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Made that sequel you wanted. Thought i'd let you know.
I remember reading most burglaries actually do happen in broad daylight - when people are at work.
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That's robberies. And they are not the same thing. If you break into someone's house, which is what burglary is, in broad daylight, it's called breaking and entering, or thievery, not burglary.
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Robbery is something entirely different - it's taking something by force, or by threat of force. Why are you assuming I meant robbery when there was no implication of confusion there?
No, what I meant is literally "most homes are broken into in broad daylight - when the occupant is at their workplace and thus the chances of getting caught by said occupant are lowest". The only reason that "burglary" is the wrong word to use there is the "at night" part of the common-law definition, which isn't always held to.
These. I like these sections.
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Thanks! I put a lot of work into their powers
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Sometimes, one's profile pic matches one's comment with almost too much perfection. This is one of those times.
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You do realize that's not what the human tag is for, right? That tag is there so that you can include human beings into your story. For example if a human from our Earth was transported to Equestria and interacted with ponies, that would be the correct use of that tag.
As for humanized ponies, the "anthro" tag is what you want. Anthro (short for "anthropomorphic") in the context of this website basically means "ponies with human-like bodies", which seems to be what you're going for.
How convenient that the other elements have crushes on her.
i just gotta say ive always wanted to see as story like this, especially one as well written as this one. although i would like to see a scene where all of them do it. but maybe that just my bone talkin' other than that, amazing work!