The Center of Her World

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TGnPT

TGnPT #1 · Jul 17th, 2016 · 1 · · Chapter X: Relaxing ·

Really great work, couldn't stop reading once I started. Clop plot is great for suspension of disbelief, even better when it's actually good!

Forum Explorer

Forum Explorer #2 · Jul 28th, 2016 · · · Chapter X: Relaxing ·

The story aspect was really good. A nice romance story with an interesting take on what Fluttershy needs in a relationship and how the EQ Girls are different from the Pony Mane 6.

The clop was weird. Like, I could completely skip it and the story doesn't change at all. Since I hadn't read any of the other stories in this continuity, it's just sorta there with very little reason as to why. The clop itself is fine, just feels tacked onto the rest of the story.

SaintChoc

SaintChoc #3 · Jul 29th, 2016 · 1 · · Chapter X: Relaxing ·

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Like, I could completely skip it and the story doesn't change at all.

That was somewhat how it was designed, but if it didn't work, it didn't work. Totally fair! Thanks much for the feedback!

ThatBadGuy

ThatBadGuy #4 · Jan 12th, 2020 · 2 · · Chapter 1: Matchmaking ·

Hmmm... Let me just quickly check my fetish list if this story is relevant to my interests...
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..., Oviposition, impregnation, micro, macro, inflation, nanana... Ah, friendship orgy! Seems everything checks out!

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THIS IS RELEVANT
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