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pony-writer/pornographer looking for work. old stories undeleted. i'm sorry. Patreon here

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This is really good, not many human x pony fics I've read and enjoyed, will there be a reverse chapter human rainbow with pony shy, that could be interesting

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we're open for pretty much infinite combinations of pony x human, just needs the right itch to bite us or the right commission to come along. :pinkiesmile:

:yay:

I helped!

Also, good story.

Damn. That was hot! Great job!:moustache:

But that was the chance she was taking, and besides, Fluttershy was in bed anyway, and not listening at the door for the minute traces of pony sex sounds.

:yay:: "Yeah, whatever you are telling yourself, Dashie."

She just wanted to make sure she was seeing... what she was seeing. Which was... pony!Dash masturbating. To a porno video. Of a person, going down on a pony. Over and over again.

I don't see anything wrong about that.

"It's just... something I watch before bed. Y'know. To help me, uh... sleep."

Normal ponies use an bedtime story or an glass of warm milk.
Rainbow Dash isn't an normal pony.

"I... I guess you can watch..." Dash said. Her brain was scrambling for excuses, but everything came out 'go back to touching your pussy', and it was getting harder and harder to resist that instruction with each second of the video that went on.

:rainbowderp:: "Well, Twilight does say I should use my brain more often..."


Good story!
I enjoyed reading it.

I swear I had a dream of this exact situation last year.

Comment posted by HABIT_13 deleted Jul 3rd, 2022

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all ponies know now a day is eat spicy clop, do tiktok, and lie

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Comment posted by HABIT_13 deleted Jul 3rd, 2022

This is your official review from Dirty Little Secret's Dirty Little Contest!
Remember to vote in the contest's poll -- voting closes at midnight, June 6th.
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------ Review ------

Please keep in mind, I know I can be overly critical and negative at times. I can always find something to nitpick, even in the greatest works of literature ever written. Please don't take it personally!
-Convenient -- but also sexy -- that Rainbow gets caught watching exactly the kind of porn she has the opportunity to act out.
-Was doing extremely well, but turned rushed near the end and then just cut out at the best part.
-Wish Rainbow got an opportunity to return the favor.
-Would have liked more exploration of each other’s bodies.
-That sure seems like X-rated material, not R-rated...
-Some typos such as: definitely no longer in site teh title screen
-Very cute how Rainbow tried to hide what she was doing, even though it was obvious.

------ Scores ------

To clarify what these scores mean, check my judging rubric.
Cloppability: 60/100
Allure: 80/100
Enticement: 90/100
Immersion: 79/100
Prose Quality: 80/100
Total Score: 389/500
The more specialized scores for individual prizes, as well as the results of the community poll, will be published when the full results are announced. If this story wins any awards, there will be another post in the story comments sometime after June 9th announcing that this story has won.

Thank you for participating, and thank you for contributing to Fimfic's collection of clop!

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