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Hopeful_Ink_Hoof


[He/Him] Just a writer who likes MLP and hopes to make a living off it: https://ko-fi.com/ink_hoof

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With The Mane Six out of town, Maud has been asked by her sister to look after things. So when a mad scientist makes his way toward Ponyville, it's up to her to try and stop him. One way or another.

Maud is not very excited about it.

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:pinkiehappy:

The fool! The mad fool! He should have consulted with her!

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Unlikely, but not impossible.

:twilightoops:
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:rainbowhuh: How the Hay did she get so strong?
:pinkiehappy: 100 Push Ups, 100 Sit-Ups, 100 Pull-Ups, and a 100 Mile Run. And she did that everyday for three years.

Huh. Now I want to see Maud and Chipcutter interact.

As for this story, delightful portrayal of Saitama's dilemma in pony form. And Maud should look on the bright side; at least it wasn't a sale day.

Thank you for it.

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And managed to keep her hair.

The funny thing is that that is exactly how I imagine that would go in the actual show.

I like the theme, tightly plotted, your storytelling is sparse but even-paced, characterization is workable. You do seem to have a few issues with your grammar, and with repeating things you just wrote. So, thumbs up but no Ko-fi right now.

Shit, I would have asked her out. Pansy ass can't handle a strong woman.

God-King Cracked Pot, Master of The Immortal Stone Army!

I wish that i could wake up from this funny dream, if someone had a title like that i'll laugh my butt off

Well done Maud. You just proved that magical constructs can feel fear. Took less time than it did for Vegeta as well.

One Punch Mare lives!

I realize why Maud seems so diffident. Because she doesn't HAVE to worry.

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