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TheBrokenBrony
wanted to join a site where people are friendly. i'm medically diagnosed a suicidal, but i'm getting help. "Hello everypony, please be gentle with me."
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Great start. You have a lot of potential here.
A very interesting start. I look forward to what the future brings. Take as much time as you need to flesh out your ideas.
Also I love the title of this chapter. It sounds like an epic one-liner from an action movie.
Hey, this is a pretty interesting read. Not bad for your first story.
Wow this is amazing. I'm on the edge of my seat and I can't wait till the next chapter.
This is nice. I like the story.
Pretty good. I like the hero in this. He seems honest. Can't wait for more of this story.
This is pretty well written so far got a few mistakes that plague even more veteran writers like using "here" instead of "her" or even towards the end at:
When the words "may" and "be" were jammed together. Overall for a first attempt at writing it was pretty high up there for fanfiction.
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Thank you for pointing that out at the end. Wish I could’ve seen it myself before I published it. Writing is very hard for me to get down. I’m glad you weren’t given a bad experience reading it so far.
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I’m flattered you think of ‘me’ as a hero. The fact is though I am definitly no hero in this fiction. Just someone tryin to get by after suddenly ending up in Equestria.
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I thought there'd be a human tag here.
When i see this quote i IMMEDIATELY Know your going to have potentials!
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Your welcome pal. Can't wait for more.
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i just did what i could cause i guess there is a tag limit to stories. i apologize if that brought any form of discomfort for you in any way.
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Not at all, I just didn't know if the main character was human, wasn't human, or was but he changed anthro pony. Basically, I was having second doubts on reading your story or not.
Seems promising, I look forward to future advancements.
>anthro
Do svidanya
*Sees image.*
Wow its a good start now I really curious what happens next
Has he had a horrible life in the past or something?
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im a suicide case, to me my past is bad, im sure maybe others have had worse though.
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That's messed up and I am sorry what happened to you
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Good boy. We have too many 'heros in equestria' as it is. It'll be interesting to see how a commonfolk reacts to this technicolor madness.
Still can't wait for the next chapter coming I'm excited for it
this story is getting better and better
How is the progress of the new chapter coming along just asking thats all
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To be honest. Not doing too well. I have all of it ready to go in my head but since I don’t have a laptop anymore I can’t type it up. It just refuses to turn on even when I plug it in and I don’t even know how it happened.
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I know how you feel trust me its pain in the A** when computer won't do what you want it always acting stupid at these times
Also have you got someone to check your laptop to see why it is acting like that?
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Not locally anyway. And sadly I still don’t have a car either.
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Well that's sucks
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I believe that it is very hard to deal with the feelings alone, those are changing your view of life or simply making you think in a bad direction. Many people believe that it is only the thoughts are the hard part... they are all wrong, the hardest part is the feelings without thoughts. You feel bad without reasons and then you have to start thinking to make that feeling go with a reason or meaning... even if that makes you feel bad.
Feelings don't always makes sense and the human mind was made to try and interpreted things so most things makes sense. Can anybody see the problem?
Please, don't go away with or without a reason. Write things on paper so the thoughts don't plague your mind, take a few minutes when you have a little time to live a little a fantasy. It's not a game about who had it worse, for me it's more about who can keep going and I feel like you can go farther than anybody I know.
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Thank you for your very insightful message. It definitely does help me deal with life knowing people believe in me when I start to lose faith in myself. It’s people like you that remind me to believe in myself to get out of negativity caused by both actual reasons or the complete lack of a reason. Hope you yourself are doing ok. And thank you.
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Asperger's and "Family depression" does weird things to one. For example, Asperger keeps things logical and analytical but the depression only makes me feel like crying without reason, always around the corners of my mind. For me, it's not that bad but for many people is very different.
I can always disconnect my mind from emotions for a bit but I know that it will hurt later on, I just feel like I have keep going.
I hope you can get better with the feelings in the future. Godspeed TBB.
Dame that was dark and now he throw himself into the mirror
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It’s not. It’s just at a point that’s hard for me to write. Bad memories of the past and the pain I’ve inflicted on my girlfriend from hurting myself isn’t exactly easy for me to publicly jot down.