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Skylarking the Stargazer


Passer inter meos ocellos labebatur... et inebriatus... etiam līberātūrus.

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"This is a Fedora Felt original! Look at this bold stitching! These daring textures. It's a whole new take on western chic! There is no way I would wear it in the grove."

I could still recall those words floating in my head seventy years ago... But here I was, all alone in this isolated farm once again, collecting nuts, feeding squirrels, back to where I started when I was a mere colt. And through that period of time, a lot has slipped away from me. But what stands out from them all, is the one and only gift I've kept sacred until this very day...

Based off the MLP holiday special, Best Gift Ever.

Edit: Now proofread and edited by the dobermans!

Edit #2: Now reviewed as grade A by the wonderful (and comedic) Vertigo22!

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Comments ( 4 )

I have reviewed this here.

9613086
Thanks for another one of your stunning reviews :3

It's rare to find good stories about Pistachio (or any stories about Pistachio, for that matter), so this was a great jaunt and... well, a surprising take on him since he's now both very old and apparently a terrible pony at heart. Still, you manage to twist the character for the sake of something good (his characterization is well thought-out and justified, albeit a bit shallow... though that's mostly because I wanted to see more of those in-the-past scenes as not just quick flashbacks) and not just for the sake of subverting expectations.

There's not much else for me to say, other than... thank you for the good story!

11109443
Thank you, good sir. A common critique, which you pointed out, benefits from a more fleshed-out narration of more than ~4k words. I wanted to finish this on the day that the story title has suggested, so I definitely rushed it and such consequence robbed me of inching closer towards perfection.

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