After their superb performance at the Wonderbolts Academy qualification, Sky Stinger and his best friend, Vapor Trail, take a break up away from the influence of Cloudsdale and the Wonderbolts; away into the fearsome, large, white clouds, where no pony bothered to go, and especially not beyond.
There, it was no longer a normal way of perceiving the new light hosted by the Sun. The two pegasi have arrived to the next level of atmosphere where only the two of them would gladly appreciate.
They celebrate, they rejoice, at the relief that they lived for so long to see this day.
Proofread by again, the amazing Azure Drache!
This was really nice! It was a little too sappy for my personal tastes, but that's beside the point. I really liked this. Have a like!
7701832 Aw thank you! I put my thoughts into this one.
The writing style was a little awkward and over descriptive
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Oh yikes! Thanks, by the way.