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TheStoryteller


A guy with somewhat good idea's, who's penmanship needs improvement, and is kinda clueless

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It is said that "love conquers all", this statement is true, but how can love exist in a world filled with darkness and hate. This is the story of those who found love in this world, a story of friendships forming and breaking, and a story of those who were lost returning to the light.

Current ships:
SoarinDash
CheesePie
Flashlight
Fluttercord
Spike x Ember

More ships will most definitely be added

Chapters (12)
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Comments ( 103 )

Interesting premise. I look forward to seeing where this goes.

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Thank you for the comment, I'm actually a fan of your stories so it's nice to receive a comment from you

No prob. Just curious, but which is your favourite?

I'm down for this premise. I'll give ya an upvote.

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I like all of them, the idea of Flash being childhood friends with Twilight definitely clears things up and makes the relationship easy to understand

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No prob. I'm a sucker for anything FlashLight.

Interesting...

You get a thumbs up for an interesting concept, and I look forward to more

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Thank you for the upvote and I hope not to disappoint

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Just keep doing what you are doing, and you will be fine :ajsmug:

This seems interesting so far. I see a lot of my favorite pairings here, like Flashlight, Soarindash, and Spember. Though I want to ask why are the ship names crossed out in the description? Spike and Ember weren’t even in the first chapter so I don’t know why they are crossed out too. But I do hope to see more of this soon.

Oh hey, this is being featured!

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I dunno, some people prefer it to be a surprise

Went ahead and got the next chapter out. Nice, I like this setup...

Wow, that was fast. Okay, got some good character development. Can't wait to see the story turn to the opposite end and focus on Twilight and the others.

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I'm a fast writer
but I don't think I have the energy to post another chapter today

I like it so far

You write faster than I do. WAY faster.

I like these little interactions between the characters, and I think Jonny might be vying for my Favorite Character slot. He’s facing stiff competition from Flash however.

Keep up the good work :rainbowdetermined2:

That was fast. Good job. I liked Flash and Soarin’s interactions and discussion.

Well I can say this sounds fun. I look forward to more. You could use an editor.

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Agreed, I definitely could use an editor

2 chapters in 1 day? That was fast...

I like where this is going, the alternative universe is setup nicely. Could use a little development, but I'm presuming more info will come along as the story progresses.

Also, might be worth adding the "Alternative Universe" tag to the story...

You've got a good setup, and I must admit that I'm curious to see what role Fluttershy will play. This should be interesting.

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Thank you, I'll be sure to add the alternative universe tag

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Then, shouldn't you be using the spoiler edit instead of strikethrough? :applejackunsure:

Then came the sixth and final child, an earth pony mare by the name of Jonny Appleseed. Jonny has light brown fur, a short green spiky mane, and hazel eyes. Jonny wasn't the most sociable type, as he preferred spending his time in the field rather than with others.

Um, mares are girls.

Okay. I'm a little confused, but hopefully the next chapter clears things up.

Flash watched in horror as Soarin took his blade and chopped one of the books Flash had written in in half. Flash's left eye twitched, he kicked his sword up and grabbed the hilt with his teeth and unsheathed his sword. "You are so dead!" Flash roared as he lunged at his brother.

SOARIN YOU LOUSY BOOK-DESTROYER! :flutterrage: That being said, I like this interpretation of Flash. It's not very common but also fits well with whatever little canon reveals about his character.

"Well, Sis, I'll tell you how." Cheese said, getting up close to Sunset he revealed his secret. "I lie to myself." He whispered. "I tell myself everyday that everything's gonna be alright, but I'm lying." Cheese admitted, placing a hoof on Sunset's shoulder. "And I don't know how much longer I can keep it up." Cheese said, still wearing his warm smile. "Have a good day, Sis." Cheese said as he exited the room.

(sarcastically) Gee, that's not disturbing. :ajbemused:

"Well, Sis, I'll tell you how." Cheese said, getting up close to Sunset he revealed his secret. "I lie to myself." He whispered.

I was not expecting that :rainbowlaugh:
Anyway, I really like the story so far can't wait for more! Keep up the good work!

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Whoops, imma go and fix that

Another wonderful update.

"There's no need for formalities, Princess," Flash smiled, "and to answer your question, I'm afraid that I don't read that much." Twilight's interest faltered. "I actually prefer to wright." Twilight's interest was regained and doubled upon hearing that.

Excuse me while a go fangirl. :twilightsmile: (sneaks away...very badly) AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! :pinkiehappy:

There was a disturbance in the shipping community, almost as if thousands of fans suddenly flipped the nearest table.

With good reason. :ajbemused: THAT BOOK-DESTROYING STUPIDHEAD! :flutterrage:

"I'm so sorry, Prince Cheese Sandwich." A purple scaled dragon with green scale underbelly, green eyes, who stood at the same height as Ember, and had wings. The dragon desperately started picking up all of the papers in no time flat and quickly ran away.

Best dragon appeareth. HECK YES! :pinkiehappy:

That ending. :pinkiegasp: Okay, what is going on? :ajbemused:

AHHHHH!!:raritystarry: I NEED MORE!!:flutterrage: Love the story by the way!:twilightsheepish::rainbowdetermined2:

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Thank you I'm glad you enjoyed it

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As a fellow writer, you have my upmost respect for this story. I can’t believe how fast you can upload these and it still seem like it took years to write. Respect!! 😁

Interesting, I wonder how this will turn out.

Well, that was unexpected. Also, I hope Lightning gets put in her place before the end of the story.

Nice to see you writing again, old friend. I definitely love the idea of how whatever Discord eats or drinks has the opposite affect on him

How can Flim and Flam both be Johnny's fathers? They're brothers, and they're both dudes. :applejackunsure:

Ooh, I'm expecting some major FlashLight coming up. :ajsmug:

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all will be revealed in the next chapter

Interesting, Flim and Flam.

There better be some FlashLight next chapter!

SO WORTH THE WAIT!!! I HOPE RAINBOW SHOWS UP SOON!! I WANT TO SEE SOME SOARINDASH! All in wll, AMAZING story and twist

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Adoption

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I hope so too!

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