Follow the exploits of Sky Bright, Golden Shimmer, Sleek Wings, Flutter Shutter, Cherry Tart, and Gambit as they follow in their parents'-the Mane 6- hoof-steps and learn about the magic of friendship. First chapter is the intro, but after that, each chapter will be a story dedicated to one pony. There will be one for each, then I will decide whether or not to extend.
Cute. I'm looking forward to keeping an eye on this one.
Awesome!
This seems like an interesting story. I can't wait to read the next chapter. I wonder who are Rarity's and AppleJack's husbands. I can guess the rest.
This story seems great. I can't wait to read the next chapters. Good luck.
Writing could use some fine-tuning imho, but I'll give it a like in the hopes of seeing some improvement over the course of this story.
Critique/Pro tips: There's not a whole lot of explanatory text, instead you have parentheses--don't tell us what's happening, show us what's happening. And there doesn't seem to be any distinction between Cherry's thoughts and the rest of the text--try using quotation marks or italics (like this with no spaces: [ i ]text goes here[ /i ]). Otherwise, it's shaping up to be a very nice story
This is ,suprisingly,good. So happy I stumbled upon it when I did.
It's driving me crazy only knowing who Twilight, Pinkie, and (I think) Rainbow Dash's Husbands are. (I think her husband is Sorien, if I spelled that right). Who are the other's with?
is fluttershy husband discord
come on we need an update this story is so super duper I wanna read more congratulations writing this new story people don't know what there missing. can't wait when there is a new chapter tell me when you write the next one okay see ya
p.s your are my hero